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    The Thalia Chronicles, Part 3, The Feast Day Continues
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    The slave matches continued after an elaborate mid-day meal. But Cali was not to enter the battle circle until the fourth and last contest of the day.


    Sofia knew she was going to earn her freedom. She was determined. Approaching her 30th year, her body had lost some of its youthfullness, but she remained an attractive brown-haired woman with pleasant features and a feminine body. Her wide breasts hung slightly on her chest. A soft-looking, rounded belly was highlighted by a tiny deep navel. Her wide hips curved into thick, solid thighs that tapered to her knees. Between those thighs, and concealing her bulging pubic mound and the split between her wide, firm buttocks, was a patch of blue cloth, signifying a woman who had won two fights. Only Charda stood between herself and her release.

    Charda only knew life in bondage . First enslaved barely after she had learned to walk, she was taken by the Eolians after one of their raiding parties razed the village where she had been held captive. Easily the tallest woman in the Amazon camp, the younger girl towered over Sofia as they faced each other in the battle circle. She had very dark, almost black skin and short wiry hair. Everything about her was thin, almost painfully so, from her narrow head and face, to her long, thin, nearly endless legs. Her breasts were flat, long and narrow, tipped by large nipples pointing almost straight down. Her thin hips and flat, well-muscled belly framed a womanhood covered with a green and yellow cloth, indicating a record of one win and one loss. In the middle of her sleek belly sat a large protruding navel. Charda would be tested today. Fighting a woman with two wins meant that her opponent would be bolstered by the most intense motivation; but Charda could fight. She used her long arms and legs to her advantage, easily defeating one girl with devastating kicks. She was ready.

    Charda's long reach allowed her to keep distance between herself and Sofia. Her legs kicked out continuously, aiming for head and groin and everywhere in between. Sofia managed to block most of them, and those that hit her, didn't land solidly. The shorter, older woman was getting frustrated, however, as she was unable to land any blows of her own. At last a spinning side-kick from the young black woman caught Sofia full in her left breast. As Sofia cupped her injured breast, straightened up by the blow, Charda drove her foot deep into the softness of the older woman's belly. Sofia gasped and doubled over clutching her guts. Charda moved in, locked her hands together, and brought them crashing down onto Sofia's back. From her knees, the brown-haired fighter managed to slam a fist into the black woman's belly, but it had little visible effect on her firm abdominals. As Sofia stood up, her taller foe kept her advantage as two more kicks to the chest were followed by a punch that sank into Sofia's soft, naked belly. As she fell to her knees with a loud "OOUUFFF", more rabbit punches knocked her flat on her stomach. Charda reached down for her, but Sofia managed to roll her body into the tall girl's legs, tumbling her to the ground. Charda was the first to rise, and with Sofia on her knees, aimed a foot at her face. Sofia grabbed her foot and twisted! The black girl fell heavily on her small, tight ass cheeks, and with her long legs splayed wide, her cunt was now totally exposed. Sofia made no mistake. As she rose, she lashed out with her foot, catching Charda squarely between her long, slender thighs. Charda screamed. She screamed louder and her eyes bulged with excruciating pain and shock as Sofia smashed the heel of her foot once again into the fallen woman's wide open pussy!! The thin black slave rolled on the ground in agony, grabbing her devastated cunt and pubic mound with both hands.

    Sofia pounced on her fallen adversary, and with Charda's hands still clutching despertely at her violated cunt, proceeded to pound her thin breasts and flat belly with powerful punches. Charda finally landed some blows to Sofia's face and head, but the older brunette absorbed their punishment without stopping her assault on the fallen black woman's body. As her attack on the smooth, slender belly beneath her continued, Charda's once-firm abs were breaking down; each of Sofia's fists sank a little deeper into her tender guts than the one before. Suddenly the young black woman's right knee shot up, cathching Sofia on the side of her face and sending her tumbling off of her. Both women rose slowly to face each other. Charda's right fist shot forward....WHUMMP...and with a small black fist BURIED in the soft bulge of her belly, the older woman OOOMPHED and doubled over, grabbing at her pain-filled gut. A driving knee to her wide open left breast had the older woman reeling. But Sofia was not going to be denied her freedom. She knew the black girl's abdominal defenses had been breached, and fired back punch after punch into the now baby-soft belly of her taller opponent.

    Charda suddenly let out an ear-piercing scream and looked down at her belly, now covered with blood! One of Sofia's blasts had ruptured her navel! Her awful screams continued as blood poured out of her navel, and she lunged wildly at Sofia, her hands turned to claws trying to rip her opponent's eyes from their sockets. Sofia ducked under her desperate lunge and continued to punish her thin black body, burying fist after fist deep in Charda's bleeding belly. Charda's screams turned to cries as she finally sank to the ground, As the judges stopped the fight, she was curled up on her side, reddened hands desperately trying to stem the heavy flow of blood from her ravaged navel. She would survive.

    Sofia, with an exhausted, exultant yell, raised her arms in victory. She would be welcomed into the Amazon camp a free woman, and if she proved herself in battle, she would become a warrior.. equal to the thousands of brave women who had gone before her. With great desire and anticipation, she looked forward to meeting that challenge.

    Thalia was also breathing heavily with anticipation, Cali's fight, her first, would be next.

    <font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ April 09, 2007 09:57 PM: Message edited by: Abbyfan ]</font>

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    Great work as usual, please continue!

    MikeJV

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    Mike and VCHICK,

    Sincerest thanks for your kind words.
    Your compliments are graciously accepted.
    I hope "Thalia's Tale" will continue to please.

    Abbyfan

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    yes... really gooooooood work!

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    Fantastic! Can't wait for Cali's fight!! [img]smile.gif[/img]

    Cheers,
    Veronika

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    Cool

    Clairification Please!


    I have seen The Thalia Chronicles, Part "1", The Feast Day
    as well as The Feast Day The Thalia Chronicles, Part "1",

    Is Feast Day a "Part" of the Thalia Chronicles?

    In other words, is Feast Day a multi-part story INSIDE The Thalia Chronicles, which is made of parts, each of which is a muli-part story,
    or is FEAST DAY the "series" and the Thalia Chronicles a multi-part chunk of THAT?

    Thank you [img]graemlins/devil.gif[/img]

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    Segano,

    I truly appreciate your post. I take it as a real compliment, coming as it does from someone who's writen SO MANY splendid stories ( "Deathfight in a Park", and "Deathfight in Japan" are just 2 of my favorites ).

    Thank You, Indeed.


    Ted,

    Sorry for the confusion. These stories do appear on other forums ( "Deadskirts" and "Seaking's FemFight", for example ) And, to further confuse the issue, they may be titled the "AMAZON" chronicles at other sites, and the chapter numbers may not coincide...

    All of this has been due to my being a "rookie" in the field of story writing.....

    "Feast Day" just encompasses some of the story. the title of the entire work being "The Thalia Chronicles"

    The DEFINITIVE set of chapters and titles will be as they appear here.

    I trust these circumstances have not detracted from your enjoyment of the Tale.

    Abbyfan

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    i wish you continue this, as it is a very... inspiring work. keep on with this!

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    Segano,

    Thanks again for your encouragement....the next chapter should be posted within a week...I sincerely hope it meets with your approval...and of course, with the approval of other readers.

    In addition, I have recently written other stories posted on other sites...and may re-post them here....

    Thanks so much,

    Abbyfan

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