The Discovery!! (short story)

[Shindy]

Carolyn sat in her car seething. She couldn't believe she had let her emotions get the best of her and now she was sitting in her car across the street from her boyfriend's apartment in a big gown, all made up. What the hell was she thinking? What would she do if her friends were right, run over there and yell at him? He had blown off this big fancy fundraiser for what he had told her was business meeting and she hears that he's fucking some other bimbo!! Well, she'd find out.

The taxi pulled up moments later, of course, in reality she had been waiting since midnight and it was now 2:15 in the morning. He got out of the car and she couldn't help but see how "cute" he was...and then SHE got out of the car. Carolyn's heart pounded. All she could see was the girl's long straight, platinum blonde hair and her back. Then, for some reason, the girl turned and paid the cabbie. Carolyn saw the girl's face and her jaw dropped and her heart sank. It was Nicole Ross, perhaps Carolyn's archest of enemies since junior high school all the way to now, at age 22.

Nicole was wearing a black tube top and tight black pants, but somehow, the way she was hanging on Rick, Carolyn didn't expect her to be wearing much at all for much longer. Nicole's huge tits shook minimally as she walked up to Rick's townhouse.

Carolyn thought of some of their history. Nicole and Carolyn had first battled each other over some junior high school thing under the bleachers in eighth grade. Nicole had beaten Carolyn up that day and to this day was the only girl to ever have successfully done that. That summer, ironically, both girls had developed, and developed big. Both girls came back with D or DD breasts and this created even more competition between them. Then, late in 9th grade Carolyn stole Nicole's boyfriend and that led to another meeting behind the bleachers, once again in Nicole's favor. That fight, however, had been in Carolyn's favor until one of Nicole's sisters had jumped in to help. That also led to a big fight between Carolyn's sister and Nicole's sister but that's for another day...Anyway. No other problems arose until the girls competed for beign captain of the soccer team in the fall, cheerleading squad for basketball in the winter and tennis in the spring. Carolyn was chosn for soccer and the tennis team while Nicole was selected for cheerleading. Yet another fight, this time Carolyn kicked Nicole's ass. Carolyn was pleased with being able to prove that Nicole was not so much tougher than she was after all...

Two years after graduation was their last run-in, one vacation the night before Thanksgiving when Nicole and her sister and Carolyn and her sister went to town on each other with Carolyn's sister getting her ass kicked and Nicole and Carolyn fighting evenly until it was 2 on 1.

Nicole's rage overflowed and she stormed out of the car in her black dress, her blonde hair hanging over her halter top. Her four inch heels clicked as she ran across the street. She saw the light go on for a moment in the bed room as she got to the door and fumbled for the key. Rick and she had been dating a year and he had given her a key a while back. Now it was going to be interesting how this key would help her. She was pretty sure she would shove it up his ass when she was done with what she had to do.

She opened the door. Nicole's heels where tossed about the foyer and her tube top was on the bottom step. She could hear the music coming from the bedroom and the sounds of two people fooling around. She kicked off her heels and then realized she was wearing a 600 dollar dress that she could barely move in. She knew she was probably going to be in a fight and she knew that Nicole was probably naked anyway, so rather than ruin the dress...

It dropped to the floor around her ankles. She quietly crept up the steps naked. The door to Rick's bedroom was open. She stood in the doorway, all 5'7 123 pounds and 36DD of her, fully made up and completely naked, her narrowly trimmed airstrip pubic hair the only thing covering her. She cleared her throat as Nicole rode Rick.

Rick looked over and was stunned at being caught. Nicole was off of him in a second, facing Carolyn from halfway across the room. Rick suppressed a smile, he had secretly hoped for something like this but he had never dreamed of it being this perfect. He knew both girls were hotheads, both hated each other and that both wanted to keep him around.

"I'll deal with you later..." Carolyn hissed at him.

"You fucking skanky bitch..." Carolyn hissed at Nicole.

To which Nicole replied, "You know why I don't look surprised you ugly whore? Because I smelled you coming."

The two big breasted blondes were at each other in seconds. Rick came instantly and then started working on the second go 'round. Nicole rapidly gained the advantage over Carolyn, pounding her face and tits and backing Carolyn against the wall. She scratched at Carolyn's face and hair and kneed her in the crotch. Carolyn moaned and continued to try and fight back. She punched Nicole several times and finally got her backed up enough to kick her in the groin. Nicole grunted and stumbled back against the bed, clutching her wounded twat. Carolyn's eyeliner was running down her face as she raced toward Nicole. She was about to jump on her when Nicole slammed a fist into her tit. The breast was crushed flat against Carolyn's chest and Nicole followed with a punch to the face. Carolyn went down.

Nicole kicked her several times. Carolyn curled up to protect herself and Nicole jammed her long nails into Carolyn's butt cheeks and crotch, clawing at them. Carolyn started to sob. She kicked at Nicole and was able to get her away enough to get to her feet. She looked at Rick and saw he had an erection, but that he wasn't helping her at all. No verbal or physical help for her against this bitch and she was losing. This was the only girl she had ever had trouble with in a fight and there had been many others...

She swung wildly at Nicole, letting her anger get the better of her. It missed and Nicole countered. She felt her legs get weak as Nicole followed with an uppercut to her chest. Fire exploded in her right breast. Another punch crashed into her head and suddenly the room was spinning the sound was muffled. Fire exploded in her left breast and then pain in her gut wouldn't allow her to catch her breath. She turned to face Nicole as the last punch for her to see crashed into her face. The room went dark and Carolyn crashed to the floor unconscious.

The End.

[MikeJV]

Short but very exciting, enjoyed it alot!

MikeJV

[Catwacher]

Damn Shindy what a story! No way you can leave your loyal fans hanging like this!! What about the sisters? Do Nicole and Carolyn finish this once and for all? The possibilities here are endless!

Thanks for a great one!

Cat

[procrustes]

I loved it! I'm not a huge fan of your stories, but this was excellent. The story moved along at breakneck speed and didn't take any unnecessary detours. The characters were well defined and certainly to my liking. I like stories that develop slowly too, so the brevity and pacing of the story are not solely what made me like this one. Just a well done job!! I hope to read more of your writings.