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    Underground Fight Club (used this title before, I think)

    Jackie walked down the steps into the hot subway. Her large breasts jiggled gently with each step, her blonde hair pulled back in tight cornrows. Her make-up was on fairly thick for her, one of the things that she knew was appreciated where she was going. Although she was wearing work out gear--a skin tight tank and lycra exercise pants, she knew that she wouldn't be wearing that soon. It was very late, or very early depending on your perception of things, and the subway platform was largely deserted. The few people still there were t he scattered, less fortunate who were looking for a place to sleep and some of the drunk twenty-something people who were stumbling home from bars and parties at 2 in the morning. In general, she would go unnoticed at this hour, but Jackie was very attractive, and her physique was impressive: she wasn't "big" but she was very well-defined, looking a bit like a lightweight fitness model.
    As she walked onto the platform, several drunk boys wolf-whistled at her and she ignored them. That was generally adequate to discourage the drunken idiots from any further pursuit. She put her bag down at the edge of the platform and hopped down onto the tracks themselves. Several of the drunk people were shocked, but she grabbed her bag and disappeared down the tunnel and they quickly forgot about the beautiful woman who had just walked through the station and disappeared almost as quickly.
    It was about 150 yards down the track that the unfinished tunnel's aperture opened onto the mainline and it was here that she turned. She walked down the pitch black tunnel, using a flashlight to guide her until she heard the crowd she was seeking. The hum of the generator was also audible this far into the tunnel. When she came on to the open space, the area that was planned for a stop on the unfinished line, she was surprised at how many people had come to see this particular fight. She had been told that she and Carmen, the girl she was fighting, were two of the most popular fighters in the Underground Fight Club, but she was pleasantly surprised. This large of a crowd would bring more money to her pocket. She pushed her way through the crowd and found Nadine, the woman who always coordinated things with the fighters. Rumor was that in her younger days, Nadine was the best fighter around, but after shattering her pelvis and breaking four ribs in a fight, she had retired and had started coordinating fights instead of participating in them.
    Carmen was already there, apparently having arrived only minutes ago. The "ring" had been roped off and she was standing there stretching, a sheen of sweat already covering her almost naked body. Carmen was beautiful, Jackie noted, with dark hair pulled back in a tight pony tail and high cheekbones, full lips and breasts that were as big or bigger than Jackie's own D cups. She was no taller or heavier than Jackie with a very similar build, washboard abs and ripped shoulders and biceps. She had dark olive skin and wore the black G-string that covered nothing but her vagina--clearly she was completely shaved. Carmen wore knee-high black boots with 4 inch heels and steel toes. Jackie quickly stripped to her white g-string and changed into her fighting boots. She pulled on the weighted fingerless gloves that Carmen similarly wore and began stretching. After a few minutes Nadine called them both over to her. She said quietly, "This is a big crowd tonight, I'm hoping for a long fight because I jacked up the price for you two, so you'll each get 5 grand and the winner will get a twenty five hundred dollar bonus."
    Both girls seemed pleased with this, as Nadine knew they would.
    "Let me see your nails."
    Both fighters held out their hands, Carmen's fingernails sharpened to a point just like Jackie's, however Carmen's were magenta and Jackie's royal blue.

    After a few more minutes of prepping, the fight was ready to start.

    Nadine announced both fighters, explaining that the rules were simple: No rules, fight to submission, weighted gloves with sharpened nails, weighted boots. Both fighters were of a similar height and weight, both were undefeated. Both had augmented breasts.
    Seconds later, to the roar of the crowd, the fight was on.
    The two fighters circled and then closed the distance. They swung simultaneously, both connecting perfectly with their opponent's jaw. Jackie saw stars instantly. She couldn't believe the power behind Carmen's punch. Carmen's knees buckled and she almost went down. Carmen though, was quicker to recover, moving fast with two unmatched jabs, snapping Jackie' s head back. She moved in closer, bringing her hands around Jackie's neck and bringing her knee up twice into Jackie's crotch, lifting the blonde off the ground with the blows before shoving her backwards.
    The blonde stumbled back in a defensive position and Carmen moved in quick. Her weighted thudded mercilessly against Jackie's arms and flanks until another power punch snuck through, connecting squarely with Jackie's left tit and producing an explosion of pain. Jackie grimaced as Carmen swung a wide right hook into her kidney and then another punch landed perfectly in her groin. Jackie was hurting and retaliated promptly, slamming an uppercut into Carmen's enormous left breast and then a left jab to the brunette's face. Carmen was not to be outdone though and smashed her hand into Jackie's face and grabbed her crotch with her razor sharp claws. Jackie caught her breath through the pain and tore at the flesh of Carmen's left boob. The two women grappled with each other stumbling about for a few moments until Carmen grunted and tossed Jackie away, sending the blonde tumbling over the floor.
    Carmen leapt on to Jackie as the two struggled, threw punches and clawed while trying to gain a dominant position. Carmen successfully straddled Jackie and landed 5 or 6 unanswered punches, causing blood to spray our from her opponent's nose before the blonde was able to tie her up. Jackie was able to bring her legs up and around Carmen's torso, and the two women struggled, their muscles straining against the force of their foe, the veins bulging beneath their tight skin...
    They broke their stalemate fairly quickly and immediately grabbed one another's breasts. Their sharpened fingernails shredded the taut skin of their shapely orbs as both women grimaced at the assault of the other. Blood broke through and trickled onto their hands as the skin tore and the tissue underneath was attacked. The fire burned throughout Jackie's chest. Carmen could barely inhale a breath because each time that she did, Jackie would pull down harder on her boobs. The two fighters were at an impasse again. This time, Jackie took the initiative, breaking her grip on Carmen's left breast and jamming her thumbnail deep into the soft skin just inside Carmen's thigh.
    Carmen yelped and leapt away, allowing Jackie to scramble to her feet as the brunette recovered as well. Carmen decided to attack quickly, swinging what would have been perhaps a knockout right hook, but somehow, Jackie dodged it, and this left Carmen off balance, with her back exposed to the blonde. Sweat was covering both fighters now and Jackie slammed a weighted left glove into Carmen's right kidney. The thud was audible as Carmen's arms flew up and her back arched. Jackie followed up with a second punch, a right hook perfectly placed into Carmen's right flank again, spinning the brunette around. Carmen tried to breathe as another punch landed, right underneath her ribcage, sending her doubled over. Jackie was empowered. An uppercut to the face and then an overhand to the chest, followed by a series of unblocked combinations to Carmen's breasts set the brunette stumbling back into the ring rope. Carmen was in trouble and she crouched in a protective position as Jackie peppered her with punches like she was a heavy bag. Occasionally, Jackie would swing a low uppercut squarely into Carmen's crotch and elicit an "OOOOH" from the crowd. Carmen was weakening and she knew it. Her body hurt and the blonde wasn't slowing down, she desperately sought a window to fight her way out, but her legs were getting heavy and her breathing difficult. Her lungs burned and her right flank shot waves of electricity up and down her side whenever she tried to take a deep breath. She knew she had to act soon or else she would be in even greater danger.
    The opening came, the blonde made her mistake. She cocked her right arm back a little too far to throw a right cross and opened her face up to a perfectly placed left hook. Carmen saw it perfectly and timed it beautifully, swinging just as Jackie started to come forward with the punch. Unfortunately for Carmen, Jackie saw her punch coming too and instead of continuing with her cross, she ducked, drove forward, and took Carmen down with a driving shoulder tackle, taking the brunt of Carmen's punch on her back. As Carmen crashed to the ground, the air was driven from her lungs. Jackie quickly sat up, her big tits swaying in front of the brunette's glazed eyes as the blonde steadied the brunette's face with her left hand and pounded it severely with her right. It only took seconds for Carmen's entire left eye and cheek to swell almost completely shut. The crowd became nothing more than background noise as Carmen's thoughts became desperate and fuzzy. She wasn't a quitter though and she clawed and grasped desperately at Jackie, ultimately getting a grip on the back of Jackie's g-string and hauling up on. The thick cord dug deeply into Jackie's crotch and ass, gnawing at the flesh. Jackie roared, and tried to free herself from the wedgie. She reached back and tore at the soft flesh of Carmen's pussy, digging underneath the small patch of fabric protecting it. Carmen took advantage of Jackie's distraction and retaliated with a similar assault. Jackie screeched at the pain as Carmen's nails actually did more damage to Jackie than Jackie did to Carmen. Jackie pulled away from Carmen and leaned back a little too far. As she did, Carmen brought her legs up and around Jackie, wrapping her quickly in a head scissors and pulling the blonde off of her. The two fighters separated. Jackie was quick to her feet, Carmen a bit slower.
    Jackie circled to Carmen's left side, which was more or less blind after her beating. Carmen moved to the left, overcompensating intentionally to accommodate her new handicap. Jackie moved in and hit Carmen in the body and moved out of reach. She "stuck and moved" several times, pounding away at the brunette until one punch connected perfectly and Carmen's strength was sapped and she involuntarily dropped to one knee. The crowd roared its approval at the knockdown but Carmen was to her feet before Jackie could even take advantage.
    Jackie moved in again. Carmen spun desperately, pivoting on her left foot, the steel toe of her right connecting perfectly with the side of Jackie's left knee. The crowd gasped as Jackie's eyes went wide and she shrieked, the knee bending in at an awkward angle before snapping back into position. Despite its return to straight, the leg immediately gave way and the blonde's left leg crumpled to the floor. Carmen spun another kick, the steel toe of her boot connecting with a gruesome sound as the crack of Jackie's jaw bone coincided with blood and spittle spraying out across the ring. Jackie's body spun and she landed face down with her ass up, essentially on her hands and knees with her face on the floor, her ass facing Carmen. Carmen drove a steel toe again right into Jackie's ass, before moving in and tearing the flesh of Jackie's exposed pussy to shreds with her razor sharp claws. The muffled wails as Jackie screamed face down were almost inhuman. The blonde desperately tried to crawl away as the brunette viciously brutalized her.

    To prevent her escape, Carmen grabbed at Jackie's cornrows with her free hand, pulling Jackie's head back so that the crowd could view Jackie's tortured face, tears and makeup streaming down as Carmen tore her sex to shreds. Jackie's face contorted in anguish as she struggled with her one good leg to escape from the brutal mauling that she was receiving. Finally, fatigue worked in her favor, along with sweat as her body slipped from Carmen's grasp. She dragged herself away quickly as Carmen struggled to her feet as well. Jackie got to the ropes in time to pull herself up with her one good leg and turned in time to catch Carmen full on as the two wrapped one another up and tumbled, yet again, to the floor. Their bodies were wrapped tightly, their thick muscled legs strained, battling one another for supremacy as the battle raged back and forth. Finally though, Jackie came out on top, and as she brought herself up to begin her final assault, Carmen shoved the heel of her hand into her broken jaw, eliciting a wail that probably could be heard over the din of the subways that surrounded them. Jackie was a consummate fighter though, and she broke free and pounded away trying to get a good punch while Carmen mauled her and inflicted tremendous pain. It was this pounding that ultimately permitted Jackie to land the punch the left Carmen completely unconscious. The fight was over. Jackie collapsed on top of her foe...

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    Re: Underground Fight Club (used this title before, I think)

    really great work ...

    i hope this story starts a long line of stories...

    thx a lot

    Erik

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    Re: Underground Fight Club (used this title before, I think)

    Great! More, more ... MORE please! LOL! :-)

    Meaow
    Jessie
    A straight bitch is just one who hasn't tasted pussy yet!

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    Re: Underground Fight Club (used this title before, I think)

    Excellent story. I like the subway cavern setting. g-strings and boots are nearly "perfect" costumes in my world.

    I'm relatively new to this board and have been reading the posts from the beginning. It's taking quite a while but I'm loving so many of these stories, especially the extreme ones ending in death and the family fight stories. Thanks to all the writers who have been contributing since the beginning. I am so glad I found this board.

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    Re: Underground Fight Club (used this title before, I think)

    Just awesome work Shindy. Rough enuff, just too short! (A common refrain from me.)

    Thank you.

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    Re: Underground Fight Club (used this title before, I think)

    Shindy,

    I don't know how but you never seem to get one wrong.

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