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    I've been wanting to write this one for a while, it's short, but I think it might fit in here.

    I cringed and yelled out as others in the crowd held me back from jumping into the fight to help my girlfriend Crystal. I had seen Crystal fight a dozen times and she had never lost. Tonight was clearly going to be different. Tonight, my big blonde lover was getting the tar beaten out of her by a young girl that was new to the club. It wasn't the thousand dollars I would be out at her loss, it was just her loss that bothered me the most. Someone held me by my bra strap as I strained to get free.
    For a fleeting moment, Crystal's swollen face looked straight at mine and seemed to beg me for help, even though I knew it wasn't really what was happening. Her opponent slammed another powerful fist into her face. Crystal, all 5' 9" 132 lbs 38dd-26-38 of her stumbled and fell. The bar "champion" was down for the first time in the almost 4 years we had been coming her. Despite my despair, I felt the moistness in between my legs, some part of me was enjoying this. Crystal was 24, her opponent, a mere 19. The challenger was as gorgeous as my beatiful blonde lover. She herself, her name Lisa, was also big, reportedly 5'10" 136 lbs and definitely the full 40dd-26-38 she claimed to be. She had olive skin and slightly darker blonde hair. She had carried an air of confidence about her as she had undressed to meet my lover au naturale. Lisa had taken her share of punishment tonight, but she had clearly dished out more.

    At this point she taunted Crystal to get up, and as expected she did. The two women came together in the middle of the circle, their sweaty, naked, bodies rubbing together, their big tits swaying between them. Crystal unloaded a punch into Lisa's body, barely seeming to effect her in her weakened state. Lisa retaliating, sending shudders through Crystal--and through me. She hit her again, and again. I involutarily screamed for Crystal to protect herself and so she weakly broke the clutch and as she did so, Lisa slammed her unprotected face with another right cross. Crystal's heavy blonde body crashed to the floor, her bruised left tit, looking like raw hamburger, oozed from beneath her body. Lisa's sweaty, swollen face wasn't looking perfect either as she stumbled over to Crystal and planted herself on the small of the downed woman's back. She interlaced her fingers beneath Crystal's chin and hauled back, eliciting a scream from the pinned champion. She dropped her face down and then slammed her head into the floor before standing up again.

    "Get up!" she instructed.

    Crystal got to her hands and knees. Lisa unloaded brutally with kicks and stomps. Crystal collapsed. I whimpered. Lisa dragged her up to her feet. Crystal stumbled about as Lisa spun around and slammed a kick into her chest, sending her flying off of her feet and flat out on her back. Crystal was motionless. Lisa wasn't done though. She dragged Crystal up again and the two blondes were face to face. Crystal tried to throw a punch, but it was so slow that Lisa blocked it and sent a savage retaliatory blow into Crystal's brutalized left tit. Crystal wailed.

    Lisa dragged her over to me.

    She shoved her into my arms. "She's lost now, hasn't she, slut?" she gasped at me. I had talked a lot of trash to Lisa's girlfriend as to how my big woman could kick anyone's ass and to how she had never lost and never would. "She's not so tough anymore, huh?" Lisa continued.

    "Stop, enough. Please..." I begged quietly...

    Crystal looked up at me as I held her up, her face a mask of pain. Her big tits pressed against my body, unable to hold herself up. As I stared into her face, I saw Lisa coming towards us out of the corner of my eye.

    "Crystal, please quit..." I urged.

    "Noooo..." she moaned, "I won't quit, I could...still.....win." I shook my head no but Crystal wouldn't hear it and I knew it. The other big girl was right in front of me now, Crystal between us and I realized that Lisa and Crystal were almost identical in size and that it just must have been that Lisa was the better fighter. Lisa grabbed Crystal's hair and pulled her head back. Crystal's face suddenly contorted in pain and the crowd roared. She opened her mouth to scream in agony but nothing came out as tears streamed down her cheeks, dragging her eyeliner with them. Her body convulsed violently and I couldn't figure out what had happened until Lisa laughed a sinister laugh and I saw the huge hand-held dildo jammed up Crystal's ass. Lisa pumped her violently, and then in an incredible display of power, lifted Crystal up and over her head and threw her back down. Crystal was motionless. Lisa pranced around the circle for a moment until Crystal stirred again. She allowed her to pull the big cock out of her ass and then get to her feet.

    The two big women met in the center of the circle essentially toe to toe. Each with their hands on the cock. The test of strength began. I knew that whomever won would essentially definitively ruin the other woman. Crystal had clearly summoned all of her remaining strength for this battle with the young woman. The veins in each girl's neck stood out as their muscles strained against one another.

    Crystal yelped as Lisa grunted with exertion. The huge tool inched closer to Crystal's crotch...their legs stumbled... Lisa let out a roar and the cock was touching the entrance to Crystal's pussy.

    "Noooooo..." whimpered Crystal and she moaned with exertion and suddenly the cock inched away from her sex.

    She roared again as did Lisa and suddenly the tip of the cock was inside the young blonde. The young blonde wailed as Crystal roared with enthusiasm and the shaft was forced deeper. Lisa's legs wobbled. She wailed again as Crystal struggled to push further. For the first time in the fight I was encouraged and Lisa's girlfriend screamed frantically. The shaft inched deeper and Lisa almost fell to one knee.

    "Noooooo...noooo" she moaned shaking her head at the violation...

    Her face twisted in pain as Crystal gradually gained more ground. I could see the fear in Lisa's eyes as I began to smile at my champion's success. A tear escaped the young blonde as she gritted her teeth.

    The crowd was roaring, but then I noticed something...It looked as if I could see more of the shaft! Lisa stumbled back a halfstep and then I was sure! That bitch was succeeding in stopping the complete violation that would have ended her. Crystal moaned again as suddenly only the tip remained in Lisa. Then the whole thing was out.

    Then the tip was at Crystal's entrance.

    Lisa screamed.

    Crystal wailed.

    The shaft slammed deeply home all the way to the hilt and the violated woman collapsed as her foe pumped viciously. The onslaught was brutal and unrelenting. It was going to be over soon.

    Crystal bucked wildly, the agony obvious as Lisa pounded her with the cock. Lisa fucked the daylights out of her. And then she got up and walked around holding her arms up, her big tits swaying in the steamy air. She kissed her girlfriend full on the lips. She walked over to me and hissed "Your bitch is mine. She's a piece of crap and I kicked her ass." Then she shoved her hand up my skirt and squeezed my cunt.

    "Fuck you." I hissed. When Lisa turned around, my stubborn girlfriend had gotten to her feet.

    "Stay down!!" I screamed. Crystal looked at me blankly.

    "Get down!" I screamed again. The crowd roared as this time, Lisa shook her head. The dildo hung between Crystal's legs. Lisa walked up to her "You want more?" she asked...
    Crystal tried to lift her arms, but really couldn't. The sadistic bitch Lisa took it to mean she wanted to keep going and so she unloaded, slamming punch after punch into Crystal's unprotected head. I screamed, but was held back. Crystal careened around the little area as Lisa pummelled her into oblivion. Crystal lost control of her urine, and then she fell to the floor. She was done.

    Permanently.

    the end

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    PHEW!!! Sizzling!!! You're good ... please more!

    Meaow
    Jessie
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    COOL, nice fight! On a personal note, i'd of loved to see a more brutal finish... like Lisa taking a trophy from Crystal, my choice would be Crystal's clit. She rips it out, shows it to Crystal's gf and leaves her sobbing over the destroyed, unconscious, and now clitless Crystal... who never recovers, emotionally, from losing the fight and her very womanhood. But that's just me.*evil grin*

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    Wow Shindy! That was intense as hell! I love a good one-sided beating, especially where the bad girl wins. Damn that was hot!


    Cat

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    >Cat wrote: Wow Shindy! That was intense as hell! I love a good one-sided beating, especially where the bad girl wins. Damn that was hot!>

    Hmmm!?! Hi Cat ... now I know why you always enjoy it so much when I win ... as I'm the ultimate bad girl! TEE HEE! [img]smile.gif[/img] Which is why some call me: BIG BAD JESS!

    Meaow!
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    <Jessikafights wrote - Hmmm!?! Hi Cat ... now I know why you always enjoy it so much when I win ... as I'm the ultimate bad girl! TEE HEE! Which is why some call me: BIG BAD JESS!>

    You got that right Jess! You *always* win and always win BIG too! I'd love to have to keep you supplied with tight leather gloves for your fists and boots for those gorgeous legs!

    You can count on this cat meowing all over you Jess! [img]graemlins/devil.gif[/img]

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