Challenge III

[Shindy]

Mike JV, your memory is very accurate. I did write a similar story (only a few similarities, but I can see how you would recall it) a long time ago--characters different, setting different in many ways, but it did occur in a nice house but not for a sum of money. So there were some similarities, but I think you'll see that this story is somewhat different as it unfolds...


The hosts walked down the stairs, and, to be honest, if my tongue and jaw didn't hit the floor, I would be surprised. She was utterly gorgeous, Shanna's soon-to-be opponent that is. She looked like a spitting image of Torrie Wilson, wearing a skin tight pink mini dress which was a size too small in the top. Her makeup was perfect and her nipples were rock hard. She immediately walked up to Shanna and shook her hand. The man came to me and shook my hand, introducing himself as Robert. He was certainly older than his girlfriend, but who cared at this point. He explained that we would be fighting tomorrow and that the house "attendant" would take us out to the guest house, where we could relax and enjoy the pool, order whatever we wanted to eat, the cook would make it to order and just be prepared to fight in the morning, around 10 am.

Shanna looked at him and said, "Is there any way we could do this around 1 pm rather than 10 am?"

I elbowed her.

"What?" she looked at me, angrily.

He smiled. "And that would be because...?"

"well, I just would be a better fighter then rather then in the morning--I am more of a night owl... so the afternoon is a little better for me than the morning."

Our hosts laughed. Brittany nodded in agreement when Robert looked at her. "Okay, " he said. the afternoon it is.

We got to the guest house a short golf cart ride away and were stunned at the fact that it was larger than many of the homes in our neighborhood, plus a pool. Shanna and I were tired though so we went to crash. There was a double bed in one room and a king in another. "You can have the king" I said, "I'll take the double."

I went in to my room and Shanna went to hers. Suddenly, my door flew open. Shanna was standing there naked. "I want the king." she said, her tongue protruding playfully through her pursed lips.

"Huh?" I responded, like an idiot, of course stunned by her still gorgeous body. I definitely was still in love. "I gave you the king!"

"No..." she said, "I WANT the king," she played...

Then I caught onto her game. I welcomed her into my room. Sex had an animalistic quality that morning, and again that afternoon. Shanna was in fighting mode and very horny.

How could I not oblige.

We slept through the night and had an amazing breakfast.

Shanna stretched and went for a short run around 11 am.

When she came back she showered and got ready for the fight--stretched, put on her thong and a t-shirt and shorts over it and we called for the golf cart to take us up to the main house. It was time.

When we were escorted into the room, Robert showed me the check Shanna and I could potentially win and showed me where he and i would be sitting. The girls would be fighting in a modified raquetball court and robert and I would be sitting outside of the glass. Brittany was in a corner wearing a jog bra that she was falling out of and a pink thong. Shanna took off her clothes and I couldn't help but notice Robert and Brittany both look at her as he came to sit next to me. She opted out of the jog bra for warm ups and went straight to the black high cut thong she planned to wear for the fight.

"Trevor, Shanna is one of the most evenly matched opponents Brittany has faced--I suspect after reviewing her fighting experience that she will put up a tough match for Brittany. She's anxious to find a competitor of some prowess, her more recent opponents have been strong but not adept fighters, and that's how she's won most recently."

I just nodded. Robert picked up the microphone which connected into the room. Ladies, it's about time.

Shanna got to her feet, boucning on her toes. I noticed her thick nipples were rock hard. Brittany stood and removed her bra. Then she looked at Shanna and said "I know we agreed on thongs, but I fight naked, I hope you don't mind."

Shanna chuckled, " No I don't mind." she said, shimmying out of her own panties, "I'll do the same." Shanna was totally shaved, Brittany in contrast, had a well trimmed 'airstrip' type of pubic hair. Both women stood naked in front of one another as the fight began. I couldn't help but notice how awesome their bodies were and how gorgeous they were just to look out.

The fight was on and the two gladiatrixes were closing the distance between them.

[MikeJV]

WOO HOO!!!! Nicely done so far, and it's FIGHT TIME!!! Awaiting the action.

Glad I was right, basically, about it. The "fight for money" plot is very common, I've used it myself several times, it's fun tho! I kinda recall how some of those stories unfolding, so I'm anxious to see what you do with this 1. Like your work, have for a long time.

MikeJV

[Catwacher]

Another masterpiece in the making Shindy! I, too, have used a modifed racquetball court in some of my stories.

One was an NFL cheerleader tourney, 4 awesome babes in 3 fights until only one was left standing. Her opponent sliding down the glass, finished permanently. Then the winner was finished off by the executive assistant of the rich guy who financed the tourney. Seems the two ladies had a "history." Revenge is a dish best served cold, with a side order of leather gloved fists and boots.

Calm down MikeJV. I wish I could find it. It didn't make the journey from Germany in 1992. One of these days I need to rewrite it. :-)

You are reaching into my head for some of this one Shindy. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Shivering in anticipation...


Cat