Demon Chloe...

[SHATOUSHKA]

alex, you dingus...
while to some, the marlborough man represents
all that is evil in the (capitalists) world,
some see him as a standard no man can ever be...
and one which every man should strive to become.

rugged, independant (with a slight prompt to be
sensitive), a free-ranger... cavalier, sharp
and cunning... *insert more random bs*

maybe its cuz i'm from the south... i dunno.
i just don't invision the marlborough man as
being spineless.

just my $0.02 ramble from the singular post above

[Alex]

I read your novella. The one that Blazey trumpeted to the world on ADM.

Wow.

I decided I couldn't add anything of substance to the actual topic post, so I read it, absorbed it, and was moved by it.

But this is a new day! [img]tongue.gif[/img] , and another forum! ...and in Alex days that's easily another 100 years.

So now I feel compelled to offer a remedy.

I know that men are from Mars and women from Venus, and that many times a women does not want a resolution, but rather support, to a situation,...but gosh durn it, I still feel compelled to offer a remedy.

I think your story needs to be a trilogy.

While I doubt parts two and three could ever match Part I, I'd like to see you take a stab at writing from the point of view of the cell phone hoochy mama, (aka the cell phone accoster) call that part-2 of the trilogy.

And then write from the point of view of the dreaded marlboro man. (aka the man with no spine.), and call that part-3 of the trilogy.

[img]graemlins/hug.gif[/img]

[SHATOUSHKA]

quit deleting this thread!!! [img]mad.gif[/img]

[soulfilms]

is it possible to provide a link???

[Alex]

No, because it is of such a highly personal tone, and it was not D.C. who posted the link on ADM.

However, you can't miss it. Go to ADM-forum one, and look for the Blazey topic post that provides a link to the topic post in question.

(wonders if maybe I should provide a link...) :confused [img]smile.gif[/img]

I hope you find it!

<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ January 25, 2003 09:11 AM: Message edited by: Super-8mm in the DigitalAge ]</font>

[SHATOUSHKA]

don't be such a ****** , alex.... [img]tongue.gif[/img]

here's the LINK!, SF

*edit - w.a.n.k.e.r.

*rolls eyes*

[SHATOUSHKA]

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="90%" bgcolor="#333333" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="0"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="2" bgcolor="#FF9900"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor=""><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by Super-8mm in the DigitalAge:
[QBHow did you put back your previous comment?

Uh OH, it's supermod! (since I must have inadvertently erased your previous comment when I reposted the thread, I was going to reinsert your comment anyway) [img]wink.gif[/img] [/QB]</font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

no! i didn't reinsert my post at all!!!
i went back to repost my comments.... but when
i did... my deleted post was there!!!!

i can't explain what happened...

[Alex]

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="90%" bgcolor="#333333" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="0"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="2" bgcolor="#FF9900"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor=""><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by shatzy:
don't be such a ****** , alex.... [img]tongue.gif[/img]

here's the LINK!, SF

*edit - w.a.n.k.e.r.

*rolls eyes*</font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

Thanks Shatzy, it was a dirty job, and somebody had to do it! [img]graemlins/bat.gif[/img]

[Alex]

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="90%" bgcolor="#333333" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="0"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="2" bgcolor="#FF9900"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor=""><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by shatzy:
quit deleting this thread!!! [img]mad.gif[/img] </font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

How did you put back your previous comment?

Uh OH, it's supermod! (since I must have inadvertently erased your previous comment when I reposted the thread, I was going to reinsert your comment anyway) [img]wink.gif[/img]

[Alex]

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="90%" bgcolor="#333333" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="0"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="2" bgcolor="#FF9900"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor=""><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by shatzy:
alex, you dingus...
while to some, the marlborough man represents
all that is evil in the (capitalists) world,
some see him as a standard no man can ever be...
and one which every man should strive to become.

rugged, independant (with a slight prompt to be
sensitive), a free-ranger... cavalier, sharp
and cunning... *insert more random bs*

maybe its cuz i'm from the south... i dunno.
i just don't invision the marlborough man as
being spineless.

just my $0.02 ramble from the singular post above</font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

I meant the phrase to have a nebulous feel to it.
Both rugged, yet yellow toothen at the same time.