"my dog's last sunset"

[PNSONR]

"my dog's last sunset"

the sun begins to set, casting shades of pink, orange, and purple ...
a great blue heron calls in the distance,
a flock of geese passes overhead

my dog's last sunset

hussy seems disinterested as she noses the ground,
she briefly inspects the hole which is to become her grave ...
the nearby stream rages along, swollen by the recent rain

and it's my dog's last sunset

the sun is almost gone now ...
a vapor trail divides the sky.
dark blues and grays take hold,
a chickadee sings nearby and i wonder why

it's my dog's last sunset

...

rest in peace, pretty girl

[demon chloe]

omg i cried..

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thank you for sharing and letting us in..................*BS*

[demon chloe]

a friend says this...about the poem....

It's very good.

He has a good eye for observation.

Well, the serenity of nature is totally at odds with the coming death of the dog. You can feel his sadness and bewilderment.


[img]graemlins/heart.gif[/img] ..... something from your heart......

[juliet smiles]

I know how hard that had to be for you Pnsonr... my heart hurts for your loss.

Emotional words.an emotional time. [img]graemlins/rose.gif[/img]

[~*Mz.Chievous*~]

the way you take something so sad and turn in to something beautifal

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[PNSONR]

thank you.............

[Myra]

I cried too, it wont be long i know till I have to do the same.. cant stand the thought...