cant wait to hear the next part
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cant wait to hear the next part
Yes please continue, looks like a great fight! Have to tell ya tho, all the fancy descriptions are kinda flowery and overdone to me, that's just my taste tho, don't let me stop ya from writing that way.
MikeJV
Trailer Park Feud -Round One
Nicola Hatfield was a cow, and smug about it as she breathed deep so her boobs heaved. She smirked with pride down at the huge udders that made feed-bags of the blousy silk upper half of her chemise. Dirty blond dishwater hair heaped up and full of greasy tangles that cascaded down over her bare shoulders like a nest of yellow snakes. Cow-hipped she swayed back and forth on her shapely if short white legs, the bottom half of her chemise riding up her thighs so the beginning of her joy trail whispered to you as if from behind a thin bedroom curtain.
"I'm his new hump granny, and" Nicola pointed to her jelly roll, "I can deliver what he needs!"
"Granny?" Mimi 'the body' Mc Coy arched her brows over her shockingly bright green eyes. A Lioness with a Red Mane, the fifty five year old Queen of Back Valley Trailer Park still had more offers for her famous snatch than a Saudi King had barrels of oil. Her own 44 G cup black lace half-shell bra was waaay stretched down from her naked rip-cage over wide hips that rolled magnificently within her black silk lingerie skirt! Nicola's 40 DDs were just training titties the way she saw it. Hell. this 36 year old 'still-jailbait' ex-cheerleader wasn't worth slapping down.
But Mimi slapped her anyway. And that slap echoed like a shotgun blast up the hollow and came, its echo rolling back down, into Nicola's ears as her head began to clear and she saw red.
The two fleshy hussies slammed together like two chunks of uranium and the nuclear blast shook the down in the mouth park like another plant closing.
Cussing like two whores fighting at the gangplank of a Merchant Marine ship that had just come into harbor, their slaps turned to brutal bare knuckle punches that snapped heir jaws sideways and rattled the eyes in their sockets. Soon they were staggering around each other leaning forward into the other sluts punches as it they were leaning into a hurricane! Blood squirted in jets from both the blond and redhead's nostrils, and their eyes were egging up real good and turning green and purple.
Gasping like she was into the short strokes with Mimi's husband, Nicola grabbed a handful of sweat drenched red hair on either side of Mimi's head , any yanked down, savagely head-butting Mimi's nose, pulping it into a bloody crimson mass.
Hollering in pain pumped up by rage, the hot granny drove her fingers like talons into both of the younger girl's swinging boobs, yanked out, then twisted them into knots as if they were pasty hot toffy. As Nicola learched back to tear her torso away, Mimi dug her fingernails in deep dragging at the boobs with all her enraged might, so ten red furrows were left as each hand tore at the flesh all the way to the erect nipples.
Windmilling her arms like she was winding up to an explosion Nicola puked out a stream of profanity that blasted Mimi in the face like a flame-thrower. Mimi, arms akimbo, fists on her hips, just laughed. That was a mistake. Nicola grabbed up a two by four that was holding the front gate to the park open, and grabbing the end of it like a baseball bat, swung it around with all her Irish might!
Crack!
Teeth and blood sluiced out of Mimi's wide mouth in a spray that hosed down the side of her trailer. Shocked green eyes rolled up, and all you could see where the white slits of her eyeballs.
Nicola staggered forward on tip toes in her bare feet and peered at her wounded rival, thinking "Isn't she just gonna fall down like a normal human?"
No.
Mimi dropped on her ass, and her legs sprawled out....boasting her damp, lush, natural red garden of eden for all to see.
Both women were panting, wet huge dugs heaving, now both were naked to the waist. Blood bubbled from Nicola's full wanton lips as she wheezed, reeling. Blood flowed like a ditch from Mimi's ruined mouth. And Mimi shook her head slowly, mind returning as her green eyes rolled back out of her head and burned like lasers at her still standing younger rival. Nicola gestured "get up". Mimi nodded, and struggled to her feet. Nicola backed off, taking a baseball bat stance with her two by four.
Mimi's eyes searched the park for a weapon. Pregnant girls stood on porches with toddlers in their arms. Older wives watched from trailer window, taking long hits at bottles of beer. School kids were starting to arrive at the park. The Manager, Minimann the Pervert, had stopped mowing the grave sized patch of lawn in front of the laundry room. He pulled a half-pint from a pocket, and licked his lips reaaaal nasty. This was gonna be good.
Mimi spotted a brass pipe about 3 inches in diameter and three feet long laying in a ditch dug for some plumbing work. Nicola nodded to her. "Go get it".
The fag twins. Mervin and Howie came out of the bait shop they ran out of a kiosk on the highway in-front of the park. Each had a palm full of meth pills and a tall bottle of Jack Daniel's. Potbellied Howie went to Nicola and got her to wash down the whites. Mimi didn't need urging. She gratefully swallowed the rail thin brother's offering and dragged the pipe towards her mortal enemy.
The two women were what we used to call "Sex Bombs" in my day. They just stood there in the cool breeze and waited for the buzz to hit. I'd eat a mile of either woman's turd to get to her butthole.
Just then the school bus from Sybal Brand Junior High and High (they were both run out of the same old county building) and pulled over to let some kids out. Julie Hatfield and Tara Mc Coy got off together and they stared at their mothers and then at each other.
Minimann the Pervert let his good right hand slip into a pants pocket he had slit the bottom out of, and drank with his left hand. This was gonna be real good, indeedy!
[ more to come? ]
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More of this fight please and soon. It's really shaping up to be a good one.
Keep up the good work this going to be a good fight.
[QUOTE=Ted Mark;1045865]Trailer Park Feud -Round One
great - really great ... we "need" more stories like these