Something illegal-need story opinion
I never post here but I love coming to read everyone's stuff. I've been enjoying the downloads you've been linking here, Newtrix. I've lost Mikejv's email so I was going to run this idea past him but we haven't collaborated in some years so I guess I'll let you guys judge my stuff.
I run a yahoo club where I post my stupid stories monthly, rarely will I ever finish it but this was something I really enjoyed doing. I doubt my fan base would like it nearly as much but maybe this crowd will be a bit more receptive. Feel free to reply with flames or praise, I can take 'em both. Story to follow, thanks for reading.
Stone
PS one more thing, this is what I call a "shoot," basically a rough draft, and before I go editing and fixing the typos I just wanted to see if anybody else found this as fun to read as I did to write, I have at least one more chapter done and was going to throw in some exposition to sort out the details.
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my third match
now she was wearing just a regular bra and panties, still sported a bruise on her left cheek where i nailed her last time and still that fire in those piercing blue eyes which look even more terrifying on a petite 12 year old mulatto girl--cuz black chicks don't normally have blue eyes, the fire despite her size and age, sheesh.
i now wore underwear too, orange boxer briefs, sporting major wood now after my aunt's instructions. this is where the learning curve takes off, she doesn't want me to hold back or take it easy nor does she want me to spare my "innocent" cousin the rigors of sexual abuse that normally take place in these kinds of matches.
"Just go at her like any other piece of meat in that ring," she told me, putting an emphasis by tracing a finger up my thigh toward the bulge in my crotch.
we were on the same mats as last time, big square playmats that fit like puzzle pieces like you'd find in a day care center. We stood at either corner, as in the normal league. Her aunt told me she would shout instructions but not to let her--my aunt--distract me. Like last time she wanted no holds barred, just no permanent marks or bone breaking type of holds.
When my cousin and I came out to lock up, my aunt was yelling something but she was giving orders so fast it was like the barker at an auction house. she feigned a left jab and i saw her twist so she would try for a roundhouse kick. I gritted my teeth and said to hell with it, I caught her leg than pounded a knee right into her pantied covered twat. She shrieked like a girl in a horror movie, a loud piercing scream--I must've got her good, he he.
Still holding her leg, I quickly scooped her up and got her in a backbreaker. I held her across my knee and elbowed her in her taught little stomach. She bent up and socked her right in her pretty face. She groaned and I saw blood trickle down her nose and saw I had also split her lip. I was like a shark at the sight of that blood, instinct was kicking in, and my erection felt like it was made of marble.
I pushed her off my knee and shot home another right but this time between her long legs. She yelped again and when she went to hold herself there I quickly straddled her chest and started punching her in the face maybe six times until she was bruised up and bleeding. I wasn't trying to break her nose just her spirit, most of my shots hit her in the eye or cheek. When I could tell she was out of it, moaning and kind of lying there like a rag doll, I pulled her bra up revealing those perky little tits. Sick as it is I had been fantasizing about those juicy little melons she had been hiding. I immediately starting pinching her erect little nipples, they were long and stiff. Her one arm was free as I had sort of moved so I was kneeling over her right side, titty torturing each breast by squeezing the meat than twisting the nip. They were so firm and I couldn't help but abuse her boobs for maybe a minute or two before I was so turned on I had to fuck her. She had kind of woken up so when I moved to get up she reached for me, my wrist it seemed I don't know if she had a plan or not, but I instinctively, rolled her over on her stomach and put her in a hammerlock.
Now her mom was just trying to be a cheerleader, telling her to hold on and try to escape but even I think she--my aunt--knew this was all over but the money shot. I scooted up onto her back to add pressure and pulled her head back by her hair--natural, mixed so not kinky, and just above the shoulders. she grunted and flexed her hand, to aleviate the pain or try to get a hold of something, I'm sure.
I asked her if she was going to suck my cock, pulling back on my head to cause her to grunt, to make her see there was nothing she could do to win, I was going to get mine, so she could either cooperate or do it the hard way. "Fuck No!" she hissed and I swear I saw my aunt shake her head, probably out of wonderment; she was strong willed but was going to break this horse.
I raised up and dropped all my weight on her back, causing her to make a loud "ooof!" sound, I did this twice until she was coughing. With one hand i yanked down her panties from behind, practically ripping them off her, than knotted it around both her wrists effectively handcuffing her. Quickly removing my briefs I slid up behind my now bound cousin, used my knee to spread her legs than I spit on my dick and without even waiting for approval from my aunt plunged myself into my cousin.
She cried out, she was so painfully tight but not a virgin since there was no pop or any blood running out. I almost went slow on reflex to be nice but than I thought of how the other guys would fuck her and just went at her, humping her caveman style. I think I lasted two minutes, but I'm sure it was less, she was squeezing me it felt like but it was probably her trying to buck or move but my weight had her pinned. I could hear her crying a little, not sobbing, but those gasping, wheezes between breathes.
I pulled out when I felt my balls about to burst, as much as I wanted to cum in her, for the taboo and cuz it felt so good, I knew the load was what signified the victory so I deposited my seed on her lovely, coffee au lait colored butt--so tight--and my aunt blew the whistle to stop the match. I sat back on my haunches, light headed as fuck, and helped untie my cousin's panties while her mom brought over the towel to wipe up the mess of blood and semen.
I helped her up and we hugged, no hard feelings.
I went up to shower, offering Melody if she wanted to go first but she said she needed a minute.
After I got out and changed I didn't see Melody but my aunt told me that I did a good job, she was proud I was rough on her--her daughter, not my aunt--and would give me a call next time. I felt bad a little, and I think my aunt Barb saw that on my face, and told me don't worry everything will be fine.
Re: Something illegal-need story opinion
I may be one of the few but family fights, especially between those of the SAME family, are just strange. I don't know the law, but I would be very careful about posting things about underage women. It's a very fine line between child pornography and everything else. I don't like this stuff. I wish it went into something like celeb fights, model fights, etc. At least you know the models are over 18 and not underage or incestuous.
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I don't blame anyone for not personally liking this sort of thing, but there's really no legal issue here. It's fiction. No actual underage hotties were harmed in the making of this story.
For me, I totally dig it. I don't particularly care about the incest angle, but the grown man vs. young girl thing turns me on. I'm sorry if that bothers other people, but, again, it's not as though I'm going to actually do something about it, you know? It's just fiction.
Nice job, Stone. Reminds me of your "My lover, my rival, my step-daughter" from way back in the day.
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Fantasy is fine legally as long as you don't go from fantasy fiction to exhorting action or soliciting others in some activity.
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Stone? DUDE! I shoulf known it was you by the nick, kidman, I mean come on, how obvious is that wrestling reference.
As to my email, the old one won't work anyway, I haven't used it in like 3-4 years. I thought you fell off the planet.... or yo were in an unmarked rave somewhere.... seriously.
If you want my email, just PM me. Seriously, or did you not realize you can do that? *laughs*
I await your PM.
The King of Jazziness is out.... PEACE!
Mike
Re: Something illegal-need story opinion
I understand everyone's objection to the incest thing, I personally can't seem to get away from it but only indulge it as fantasy--I sure as hell don't wanna fuck my mother. But I would really enjoy more opinions on the other story I posted, I feel it's more controversial even without the incest angle. Please let me know what you all think by private message (btw Mike you bastard u never replied!!) or join my group and flame me, here's the link to my group I love this board for its honesty.
Stone
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