A quick fight based on a true story

This is my "fleshed out and enhanced" version of a fight that my girlfriend just told me about. It happened a few years ago when she was in college.

There was almost an audible gasp as nearly every guy and many of the girls strained to see Maria Carmazzo climb out of the field house pool. Her long dark hair cascaded over her olive skinned body, the bright purple bikini straining desperately to contain her perfectly shaped 34D breasts and her heart shaped ass. She worked the crowd, shaking her hair out and knowing that she was providing a show for everyone there. She walked slowly to her chair, her firm thighs add the proverbial icing to the cake. She stopped short only when she overhead two sophomores say her boyfriend's name in a hushed whisper. They were so busy with their gossip that they may have been the only two people at the pool who didn't notice the 5'6" 118 lb senior.
Maria's ears perked up as she heard one girl say to the other, "...so I had no idea that Donna's in the laundry room with Ryan (Maria's boyfriend) and so I just walk in and she's bent over on the folding table, her face scrunched up grunting 'oh fuck, oh fuck' as he takes her from behind."
The other girl started to laugh and said, "What the fuck did you do at that point?"
"Well, I tried to get out but Ryan totally saw me and instead of stopping, he says 'you want next?'"
The listener started to laugh again, "Now what?"

"Donna realized what was happening at this point and gave me the finger, so I bolted, I didn't want to be on that girl's bad side--she's tough as shit..."
"I know," said the listener, "I saw her beat the crap out of Sue Costin in December--it wasn't even a contest..."
Maria had heard enough. She was seething. She didn't notice, but her thick nipples had become erect and were nearly popping through her bathing suit. She stormed into the field house, knowing where her (former) friend Donna Mirabella was--in her aerobics class. A few of Maria's friends followed her, but knew better than to get in Maria's way because if any girl on campus was a hellcat, it was Maria. Who would win a fight between Donna and Maria--that was anyone's guess, but they had a feeling that they might soon find out.

The aerobics class was over and Donna was just standing there, drenched in sweat speaking with the instructor when Maria stormed in. It took Donna two seconds to realize that she had been busted. The aerobics room at the field house was a converted racquetball court--hardwood floor, one wall of glass the rest a relatively small room. Maria asked the aerobics instructor to excuse her and Donna and the instructor gladly obliged. The room was soundproof so as soon as the instructor left Maria started yelling. The handful of girls who had followed Maria into the building had their faces pressed against the glass to watch what ensued. One boldly tried to get in the room, and then found out that the door was locked. The hand gestures flew wildly as Donna's auburn, sweat-soaked ponytail swung wildly. She was two inches taller than Maria with smaller, but still full (B or C cup) breasts and washboard abs. She was wearing a white jogbra and boy-brief style lycra pants.
The gesturing and screaming appeared to get more intense when Maria suddenly slammed a right hook directly into Donna's pretty face. Donna swung back, and the fight was on in earnest.

Maria had never lost a fight but she had never fought someone as tough or as strong as Donna. Donna, for her part, had been in so many fights and had rarely lost, but she was fighting a woman possessed--Maria was fighting for her boyfriend and her dignity.
Maria connected with several punches in a row to Donna's face and head and the auburn brawler was stunned, but she was a tough fighter and hit Maria repeatedly in the body, connecting frequently with Maria's big breasts. The titpunches didn't really bother Maria, it had been a frequent tactic that girls she had fought before had used because her breasts were so big, but for some reason, Donna's punches hurt more. She was angry though and didn't care, hitting Donna repeatedly as hard as she could.
Donna was surprised at how strong Maria was, she always appeared a little "prissy". Her head was a little dazed as she reached out to grab Maria's wet hair and pull her towards, her hand slipped and she grabbed the brunette's big left breast instead, somehow popping it out of the bikini top. Maria didn't care and her next punch nailed Donna right in the stomach, the taller fighter gasping and doubling over. Maria wasted no time, grabbing Donna's pony tail and forcing her head down as she brought up her knee twice before Donna twisted free.
The window crowd exploded as blood gushed from Donna's nose all over the floor and Donna came up clutching her face. Maria ran forward and drove Donna into the wall, punching her in her back. Donna grabbed Maria though in a headlock and spun her around, twisting her to the floor. Maria was in a bad position but Donna was badly hurt. She struggled as Maria twisted and turned trying to get free. The pinned brunette pulled at Donna's hair and then at her shirt--really just a bra--and this time it was Donna's turn to have her tits exposed as Maria, trying to push Donna off of her, forced the shirt up and over the auburn beauty's tits, exposing both breasts. Maria pulled violently at Donna's ponytail, the veins in her neck standing out as she tried to keep her bloody face from being pulled backwards. She punched blindly at the brunette pinned between her and the wall, only successfully hitting her once or twice.

Finally Donna let Maria go and the two fighters got to their feet, blood still pouring from Donna's nose they circled one another, heaving in big breaths. Both tried to fix their tops but couldn't so both ended up pulling them off. Topless now, they started talking again, but it clearly got heated and they charged each other throwing punches again. This time, despite being hurt, Donna got the better punches in, knocking Maria backwards several steps and hitting her in the stomach several times so that Maria dropped to her knees. As she did so, Donna connected with an unbeleivable knee to the face that basically flattened the big brunette. As she tried to get up, Donna kicked her twice more. The auburn haired victor then grabbed the brunette by her wet head, and hauled her to her feet, dragging her over to the glass wall, she put her in a full nelson and pressed her big exposed breasts flat against the window.

"She's done!!" she mouthed through the sound proof glass to the girls watching. Then she whispered in Maria's ear as she released the hold and shoved her hand down the front of the girl's purple bikini bottom; she pinched hard on Maria's clit, her completely shaved pubic area leaving it easy to find, "This twat is done with Ryan, I own him now, so get the fuck out of her and kiss my ass you bitch..."

Hmmm, short, quick and hellavu HOT! Tee hee! Thanks! :-)

great story, would love to hear if there was a rematch, or who ended up with the guy

A blissful sigh.

Women... hmph, why are they always surprized when their man cheats? Anyway, a good story, and based on a real fight ya say? Real fight wasn't that good i bet, sssso thanks for the enhancement.

Mike

The aerobics instructor saw a girl seething with rage come forward, followed by a bunch of screeching young ladies, coming to an empty classroom where no classes were expected, and took a discreet leave. This is how all aerobics instructors should be. What gender was this instructor?

I bet the instructor was a young woman - who had an appointment with ?always-ready? Ryan. This would open the way not a re-match (this was really a finisher for Maria, who lost her boyfriend, her top, and her face!) but for a sequel.

Please Shindy, go back to your informer, and push her for more of these intimate moments of girls together!