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your smoke
hits the wall and crawls under my skin
dancing through highways of vein and vessel
dries the eyes with captivity
your smoke
traipses at the heels decorated in diamonds
searching for gold or painted glass
something to punish yourself with
your smoke
found me in a crowded corner
tasted my heavy breath and salty skin
painted my eyes in glossy gold
I found my interstates heavy with smog
when woken from your captivity
I really like this peice.
I've ALWAYS been a big fan of this style
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I love the line "dancing through highways of vein and vessel"Quote:
your smoke
hits the wall and crawls under my skin
dancing through highways of vein and vessel
dries the eyes with captivity
it's awesome.
I just love the line "your smoke"
and then how everything else relates to it...
it's like "here is what it is ... this is how it's described"
*shrugs*
I just love poetry like that...
The end was really strong too,
kinda got that "punch" to it.
So glad to see you back again [img]smile.gif[/img]
Hey! No problem. that's my job, right?
after all, I am a mod.
haha.
But seriously I'm glad you found your password, and this work makes me so glad to see you back.
How is school and everything going?
muchos gracias!
i am gonna start posting again, i lost my password for a while.
thanks for msging me and reminding me!