Hey I really haven'yt seen many westerns but i was writing a shootout scene so um could u tell me wat u think and igf it's a steaming pile of crap please tell me! it still needs work and sory about the MATRIX STYLE thing bu ti couldn't think of a better way to describe it thanx.
EXT. OLD WESTERN TOWN - DAY / HIGH NOON
RIGHT / CRAB SHOT - C/U - THE LONE GUNNER'S pair of black cowboy boots walk at a leisurely pace down an old dirt road. They are clad with bright silver spurs.
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50? TILT - DOLLY OUT - A man clad in almost all black strides toward the camera. Both hands ready at sides.
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LS - The two men walk slowly closer to each other. The Lone Gunner walks at a more leisurely pace and seems much more relaxed. While the MAN IN BLACK seems very edgy and tense. The Lone Gunner is wearing a WHITE HANDKERCHIEF around his mouth and guns are visible all over him. the Man in Black is pretty much COMPLETELY CLAD IN BLACK.
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Much shooting and killing.
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MS - The Lone Gunner and two men remain one is on a perch at the very top of a building just behind The Lone Gunner. The other right in front of the him. The Lone Gunner with two sawed off double barreled shot guns shoots the man in front of him twice then puts his other shotgun pointed up over his right shoulder and shoots twice with a small delay.
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C/U - The dirt ground. A revolver falls and a second or less later a body.
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CRAB SHOT - Six men with revolvers perch in a house with old six shooter revolvers.
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The Lone Gunner with the white handkerchief wrapped around his face drops his two shotguns, and dressed in full cowboy garb looks around the nearly barren streets. Several dead bodies litter the streets and the blood paints the buildings.
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C/U - The six men turn from their hiding places and shoot. Multiple shots of six shooter's shooting in MATRIX STYLE slow motion the bullets inch from the barrels of their owner's guns.
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MS - The Lone Gunner faces the camera as the bullet's slowly inch toward his back. As they get closer and closer almost a forth of the way to hitting him he turns quickly pulling out a completely silver (BLINDING LIGHT) 6 shooter and unloads his gun toward the windows that the Six gunners perch each bullet hitting on target in the middle of their foreheads his bullets going 5 times as fast as theirs.
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LS - The Lone Gunner gets riddled with bullets as soon as the slow motion effect stops. he falls to the ground soiling it with his blood. Soon after hitting the ground a cloud of dust and dirt forms around him and when it settles he is gone. All that remains is his silver revolver and spatters & puddles of blood.
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