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Okay, this is a fic I wrote a few months ago. It's a Logan and Rogue fic. You heard me, Logan and Rogue, as in MOVIE VERSE. http://www.hostboard.com/ubb/smile.gif Anyways I just wanted to know what you guys thought, if it sucks and I should trash it or should I be brave enough to send it to the Logan and Rogue Goddess's that are Diebin, Jenn and Sarah. God, their fic just kick ass. To quote Rogue, "All over the place." It's true, they do.
The Touch
By MoonbeamDancer
Author?s Notes- My first Logan and Rogue fic. I don?t own them; send comments to [email protected]. Movie verse, their pov?s of the first time Marie (Rogue) touched Logan.
I remember the first time she touched me. It had been right after a nightmare and she had been trying to wake me up. I woke up all right and punched my claws right through her.
Oh god, Marie. Baby, I?m sorry.
The look of pure shock and pain on her face scared the hell outta me. It was then that she reached forward to touch me. I was so shocked by what I had done that I didn?t remember yelling for help. I just remember her touch.
At first it was wonderful. Like how you might touch a lover, feather soft and warm. Then something started to flow out of me, followed by a flash of pain. Marie looked like she was in utter pain when she was absorbing my life force. I don?t blame her. Hell, I don?t blame her at all. She let go of me and the last thing I remember is the world turning black as I hit the floor.
?It was an accident.? I whispered to Storm. I looked at Logan one last time and ran out of the room, Jean and Scott helping him, and the other students scattering away from me.
Don?t want to touch the vampire.
I ran back to my room and hid under the covers, my eyes closed and Logan?s memories flashing though my mind. ?I?m so sorry Logan.? I whispered.
The End.
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"Listen very closely. There is a sound I want you to hear it's-" *BAMF!*
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That is wonderful, Beemie! I love your writing. You have a way with words, keeping it simple but not too simple, if you can understand that . . .
Anyway, great work!
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"I am the terror that flaps in the night! I am the jailor that throws away
the keys! I am... feeling really stupid."
--- Darkwing Duck
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Thanks. http://www.hostboard.com/ubb/smile.gif
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"Listen very closely. There is a sound I want you to hear it's-" *BAMF!*
