In The Search For Oneself

Please, read my script: http://members.fortunecity.com/searchoneself

Yeah, I read your script and really liked the story and the style. The images I imagined were like blade runner style and i think it would make a really good noirish sci-fi film. It lewft me wanting to know what happens at the end and this is always a good sign.
There was only one let-down: the translation was slightly dodgy so i didn't know what you were getting at sometimes (ie. myope???)

But good luck anyway on getting an agent.

Andy

I saw the word "myope"(short-sighted) in Webster and Babylon.

Completely agree with Andy about Blade Runner. The scripts smacks of Film Noir and the futuristic LA, by no means a bad thing. Good luck getting it complete.

regards
Keviano
ReelRaine Productions