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No response
No existing explination
Tonight
Extinct excuses
Reasoning has been helf for ransom
By an abstract matter
How can I explain,
translate,
and
express
Myself and what's inside me
To those around
Me
When I can't even understand
Myself
Fortress has been penetrated
Immune system has been weakened
I am my own cancer
Events spread my agents
Throughout my bloodstream
Poisoning myself
And causing my own downfall
Abstract events and matters
Crack my once proud armor
I am my own disease
Who can I turn to?
When so many have hurt me before
Who can I trust?
When I can't even trust myself
Walking in a desert
No map
No help
No hope?
~Truth 187~
Fragments of the mind
Frozen in time
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tragic...but...short lines were good.."how can i explain, translate, and express..etc"....all good...it flows. that's nice...just a little less vague sometimes in your attack on subject...cause at the end you can see what you're talkin about but the beginning still has a question mark around it in my head...
still nice flow
good questions at the end.
___---parch
