Spangly Wangly

HU-HAH!!!!! awful fucking wankers.

Spangly Wangly Wanker Woo,
I just thought I'd say how much I hate you.
Your pathetic mannerisms leave much to be desired,
I can't beleive they let you live, once they saw what they sired.
I can write with rhyme or I can write without,
I can shit on your car, or punch you in the snout,
Perhaps you should read what poetry's all about.
It stands the test of time, tall, strong, holding much clout.
It's not about rhyme's or the words that make them,
It's not about how the reader may take them,
It's about thoughts and ideas and scenes,
That some of us adore, call us fiends.
We like the way the words, give music to our eyes,
And from others minds, We are allowed to cry.
Smile, giggle, laugh, and fade away,
Through the future, the present, and even yesterday,
We read, and re-read, and read them once again,
But on behalf of poet's everywhere, you are not our friend.

[This message has been edited by Hannibal (edited April 09, 2001).]

The attempt to end that poem with a rhyming couplet is pitiful, the obvious word in that phrase being ignored there is 'rhyming'. As a professional, I am always on the lookout for new talent, and the raw feelings shown by these youngsters is nothing short of orgasmic. You 'old boys' of the board should take a leaf from these guy's book, and stop wasting your time critising them. Quite frankly boys (and girls) your work has grown a little stale.

A professional, who is a junior hostboard member with 11 posts.... that's funny, a really good oxymoron of sorts...
Perhaps you need to take a look at your details, and give me some more credentials before you start spouting... ?

yeah, i totally agree with you there because number of posts is directly proportional to poetry analysis skills.

i guess that makes me better than you.

cunt.

sorry if that sounded sarcastic.

hannible is a welcome poster here..
you are not..
why are you here?
do you have that much free time?
post something constructive next time...until you do....screw off.

I forgot to mention something.. In case you hadn't noticed, Mjuku, I got rid of all your friends' posts, and all the other shit you losers put up here, and it took me a whole whoppin two minutes. So next time, go to a board where the moderator's a dumb ass and doesn't know how to work the control panel. Actually, if you want- keep posting here, and we'll keep deleting or trashing whatever you post. I seriously welcome you if you have anything constructive to add to the forum, but until then, you can fuckin fly out, cause I don't believe we're takin your shit out for you.

--A note on poetry, writing, posting, on THIS forum!
------- On THIS forum, all creative or critical writing is welcome. All writing --only includes constructive attempts.... Posts that are not constructive such as questions from/for the group and other things that mainly involve just sharing ...well...you know...those are ok, if we like you or if you're just actually mature, respectible, and a little friendly sometimes. Until you are that...why waste your own time,-- spend it growing.


___---parch