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7 days 7 dollars 7 year olds...foreign suns melt the flowers...all the rage all the pain drips away in drops of blood freed by thorns...clarity in pain, comfort in tiny tiny holes...a layer of sweet and dirt acts as a blanket to block the hurt...raw meat burns in open flames...the cave is nothing but smoke and the smell of burning flesh...skunks pretend to be chickens while the donkeys hide away...beauty held in my arms as Puc spins tales of sin..follow the porcupines orders...laws are broken and no one is the wiser...meanings fly over the heads of young children...the future turns from book to highway and everyone is scared except the people with something to worry about...dreams float through the air on notes produced by golden strings...shady grove my love...100 dollar cuts bought on loan burn...their meaning trapped under a million tiny scabs...2 months later getting meanings wrong losing words...chapter 19 character change
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[This message has been edited by Soiled Soul (edited October 08, 2001).]
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wow - strange and alarming.
enjoyable altho i was partially lost.
character change?
hmmmm... nice ending
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same as reply for ramblings kind of i could probably write a book around each symbol i used just try to let it take you on a ride mentaly see these things and see where it takes you. let your mind make up the story in the ... fill it in and you could make a 2 hour movie
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i like it, i like to just write and write and see what comes out, i like to use crazy words for the crazy ideas in my head. it seems to not make sense except to the writer, but the reader can enjoy it because of these strange images, total mystery as to what they mean, but they sound so cool..wow i tend to ramble
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