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She trapped me in a place I did not want to be- held me back as I moved on- no connections I couldn't break- nothing I couldn't leave behind if I had to act on the fly- I have lived a life without a single regret- now I have four- and all of them are leaving her behind
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wow, what a HUGE ending.........I don't even know what to make of the rest of it...with the ending you gave....such small words for such a significant sentence
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"if I had to act on the fly"--ahh!!
not to mention the rest!! all i can say is ....yeah, i totally love this and i'm glad i started reading your stuff..cause this made it all even more worth it.
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ahhhhh....
tre bien.
i think.
yes. great piece and so well worked into such a small space.