Re: Cops and Robbers: Part 3
Very nice continuation! It's nice to get the various pieces into play and I think it's easy to see where this story is going -a four woman sexfight in the safe house! Really looking forward to the next part!
JB
Re: Cops and Robbers: Part 3
Re: Cops and Robbers: Part 3
Again, thanks for all the praise. Truth be told, I was considering having Ben succumb to his cancer but I thought it would be too sad and kinda ruin the tone of the story
Re: Cops and Robbers: Part 3
I'm very much enjoying this story so far. It's exciting, sexy, and it's only just getting started!
I'm really looking forward to your next installment, and when the girls really get to sink into their rivalry.
A few things:
-- I've never seen this description before in a femfight story, and I might just steal it: "angelic bodies".
-- this paragraph is super hot: "Holly quickly adapted and kissed back, their tongues battling viciously inside each other’s mouths as their nipples encircled each other, pink on brown. Holly reached up to bury her hands in her rival’s thick locks, which Vanessa quickly reciprocated. The hot cop girls were completely enthralled in fucking each other’s brains out all night long. Vanessa’s tongue had caught Holly’s off guard at first but the blonde quickly bounced back. She mashed her lower thigh into Vanessa’s ripe pussy, leading Vanessa to do the same in response. Their juices soaking each other’s thighs as they drooled into each other’s luscious cleavage. Holly broke the kiss, leaving a line of spit behind."
-- Always love co-cooing: "they cooed"
Re: Cops and Robbers: Part 3
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Rivals_Rapture
I'm very much enjoying this story so far. It's exciting, sexy, and it's only just getting started!
I'm really looking forward to your next installment, and when the girls really get to sink into their rivalry.
A few things:
-- I've never seen this description before in a femfight story, and I might just steal it: "angelic bodies".
-- this paragraph is super hot: "Holly quickly adapted and kissed back, their tongues battling viciously inside each other’s mouths as their ******s encircled each other, pink on brown. Holly reached up to bury her hands in her rival’s thick locks, which Vanessa quickly reciprocated. The hot cop girls were completely enthralled in ****ing each other’s brains out all night long. Vanessa’s tongue had caught Holly’s off guard at first but the blonde quickly bounced back. She mashed her lower thigh into Vanessa’s ripe *****, leading Vanessa to do the same in response. Their juices soaking each other’s thighs as they drooled into each other’s luscious cleavage. Holly broke the kiss, leaving a line of spit behind."
-- Always love co-cooing: "they cooed"
Thanks a bunch. Once I’m done with the final part, I hope you’ll upload it to your site, as well as my first story, “Sleepover Fun.” It would mean a lot
Re: Cops and Robbers: Part 3
Email me at [email protected]. I'd love to have you join us as one of our authors! So we can get those two posted and anything else you write!
I'll need some info from ya, but we can talk about that there. :3
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Rivals_Rapture
Email me at
[email protected]. I'd love to have you join us as one of our authors! So we can get those two posted and anything else you write!
I'll need some info from ya, but we can talk about that there. :3
I’ll do that once I finish this story. Thank you again
Re: Cops and Robbers: Part 3
Sorry to say but I don’t think I’ll get Part 4 done until next week. Been real busy due to Easter. That being said, Part 4 will focus on how Nicole and Jasmine came together and after that, I’ll finally pick up where we left off in Part 2
Re: Cops and Robbers: Part 3
A great idea for this story just hit me today and it made me so glad that I waited before finishing it because of that. I won’t spoil it, of course. You’ll know my idea when you see it. Let’s just say the story is not going to end the way most of you have probably guessed
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And don’t worry. Nothing about my original idea will be changed. This is just an expansion of that. All give and no take