Sometimes, the truth escapes us,
and we're afraid of what we really are.
We hate ourselves, and we hate the world,
That allows us to still live.
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Sometimes, the truth escapes us,
and we're afraid of what we really are.
We hate ourselves, and we hate the world,
That allows us to still live.
That allows us to still live.[/QUOTE]
i really like these words, seem to be something on the verge of advice.
one thing i though was that i might be kinda a stunner if you switched the last two words so it read "that allows us to live still".
just something that popped into my mind
Yah, I like it that way too!
I don't know where that came from.
It's really small, but I liked it so I decided to keep it ya know?
I figured I'd just best post it on here before I totally forgot about it and went somewhere else in my brain.
*shrugs* hehe
I love the point that this was a random thought. The more i read it the more i like it. I think you should add onto it and extend it into a few stanza's. But thats just me. Anyways awesome thought.
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