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EXCELLENT !! A fine start !!
Even the Title is unique !!
I read it like i was reading a spy story from a famous writer for this kind of stories.
You created an excellent new character who i wish to stay with us for many stories.
Even to collaborate with 732, or anyone else, anywhere else...
Chapter 2 ... yesterday please !!!
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Very intriguing and enjoyable start! And I'm already looking forward to the end of the story when, I hope, our protagonist manages to get her shot at Stacy!
I don't agree with the politics, but that's a completely different matter. This has the feel - as intended -of a 1960s James Bond novel. Great start!
JB
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JB wrote : "This has the feel - as intended -of a 1960s James Bond novel. Great start! "
I have that feeling too ! I fully agree with JB !!
We have read/watched "female versions" of James Bond.
Jamie is not only a female version of James Bond. It is something more !
Jamie (I guess that Jamie, the heroines name, was chosen as it is close to James), looks like a nympho version of James !!
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Damn, you are relentless Yuri! How am I supposed to ever catch up with your 732-series if you keep putting out stuff like this? ;)
The title made me smile instantly. Luckily for us it's not "You only come twice"...
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JB57
Very intriguing and enjoyable start! And I'm already looking forward to the end of the story when, I hope, our protagonist manages to get her shot at Stacy!
I don't agree with the politics, but that's a completely different matter. This has the feel - as intended -of a 1960s James Bond novel. Great start!
JB
Yeah, I was a bit apprehensive about the real world geopolitics myself but I wanted to make it stand out from other spy stories and make it seem at least somewhat real. Like if you took away the sex element, it would almost seem like it could happen in real life. The Bond feel was exactly what I was going for.
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So damn excited for this saga. Contrary opinion - Real world geopolitical conflicts expressed through secret sexual fights between spies is pretty exciting to me.
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So damn excited for this saga. Contrary opinion - Real world geopolitical conflicts expressed through secret sexual fights between spies is pretty exciting to me.
Hi! When I said I did not agree with the politics, I meant that I did not agree with the portrayal of China as the "bad guy" in this scenario. In principle, I have no objection to people using political themes to inspire their stories, though I would not do so myself. I take my politics too seriously for that.
JB
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JB57
Hi! When I said I did not agree with the politics, I meant that I did not agree with the portrayal of China as the "bad guy" in this scenario. In principle, I have no objection to people using political themes to inspire their stories, though I would not do so myself. I take my politics too seriously for that.
JB
The premise was also inspired by your WWIII story, in which the villains were both Russian. I considered doing that but I felt that would be too derivative. Besides, I feel Russian villains have become kind of cliche. No offense. Yeah, this is probably the last time I’ll do something like this. I’d rather not open a can of worms in a community that’s largely very wholesome and welcoming.
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JB wrote : "This has the feel - as intended -of a 1960s James Bond novel. Great start! "
I have that feeling too ! I fully agree with JB !!
We have read/watched "female versions" of James Bond.
Jamie is not only a female version of James Bond. It is something more !
Jamie (I guess that Jamie, the heroines name, was chosen as it is close to James), looks like a nympho version of James !!
James Bond himself was basically a male nympho, so it works.
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YuriLesboLover
The premise was also inspired by your WWIII story, in which the villains were both Russian. I considered doing that but I felt that would be too derivative. Besides, I feel Russian villains have become kind of cliche. No offense. Yeah, this is probably the last time I’ll do something like this. I’d rather not open a can of worms in a community that’s largely very wholesome and welcoming.
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James Bond himself was basically a male nympho, so it works.
Hi! I understand completely. World War III, as you know. was a rewrite of Whistler's story and so I used his premise. I thought it was kind of tongue in cheek and, at the time, Russia was not regarded as public enemy number one in the West, so I did not feel that the possibility of feeding negative stereotypes was too great. If I had to do it again today, I might change the Russian women's backgrounds - though I really like them and hope to use them in other stories in the future.
Looking forward to part 2 with bated breath!
JB