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<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 15, 2002 07:20 AM: Message edited by: Eliud25 ]</font>
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I see something like that, labelled as a "script", and sigh...
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<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 15, 2002 07:21 AM: Message edited by: Eliud25 ]</font>
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bless him the scripts improved a bit - we actually got some slug lines. He aint short of ideas either is he.
the marching cadences is soooooo american and it would not work in my opinion.
and who the **** are general patton and general Montgomery, a short search of google tells me they are both american, ok so the entire american and british armies lead by two american generals...hmmmmm
another fact i read was that general montgomery died in 1862 so ur only 80 years out i suppose.
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<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 15, 2002 07:24 AM: Message edited by: Eliud25 ]</font>
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<BLOCKQUOTE><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="90%" bgcolor="#333333" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="0"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="2" bgcolor="#FF9900"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#DDDDDD"><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">BRAVO: Tell me about it buddy.</font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>
You just gotta love camp-acting.
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ahh the montgomery i got was http://www.qmfound.com/BG_Montgomery_Meigs.htm
u gotta think more with ur dialogue... ask urself wud it really be sed... there are a lotta clich?s in ur scripts and u gotta pull em out and replace with something more original.
I like ur ideas tho , keep it rollin!
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<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 15, 2002 07:21 AM: Message edited by: Eliud25 ]</font>
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<BLOCKQUOTE><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="90%" bgcolor="#333333" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="0"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="2" bgcolor="#FF9900"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#DDDDDD"><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif"><font size=2 face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Well I stopped writing for a while because I was busy trying to get an agent. Now I will concentrate on the script. Tell me what you think.
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Dude, getting an agent would be far easier if you could actually write well. Practise writing. Read scripts. Do it until your arse is numb.
Usually, you write at least 3 or 4 scripts then approach an agent. Anything less and they will **** you off, unless you're next Shane Black that is...
<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ July 24, 2002 06:43 PM: Message edited by: SoulJacker ]</font>
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<font color="#a62a2a" size="1">[ August 15, 2002 07:22 AM: Message edited by: Eliud25 ]</font>
