Now are you going for Ultimate Captain America or a modern day Captain America?
The way you're describing it along with the picture don't make me think "Captain America the Superhero", they make me think "Captain America the soldier who fought for his country," I'll explain. It looks like just an everyday soldier that decided he was going to represent his country to the fullest. He adopted Cap's shield and uniform, but kept his army fatigues and standard equipment. He's not a "super-soldier," he's a dedicated one.
As for the rag, I personally think hair would be better. I don't know that rag just doesn't "feel" right. [img]confused.gif[/img]
