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Rather than block up the board with lots of little 1-2 post threads, i'll show myself here. Input would be gratefully accepted.
Ahem.
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when the young
so insecure
every emotional
there are no boundries
in love the first time
rejection depression
making that pivotal decision
the safety of a couch
i remember not remembering much
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etheral images
tonal journey
soft grey
final image
end user
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plan your escape route
between the sheets
woman serves up her lover for dinner
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old man
last roll
cast your memory back
breathlessly realise
the end of a persona
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my anguish
sultry
inviting
mute
yet crisp
so engulfed
it's genetic
it's a problem with my diet
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the mel
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I have learned silence from the talkative, toleration from the tolerant, and kindness from the unkind - yet, strange, i am ungrateful to these teachers. - Khalil Gibran
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More.
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a design to be built
narrative of dead ends
concealed spaces
forgettable portraits
we're not as different as we used to be
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larger than life
it's sex
it's everywhere
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a woman called
asked to audition
no plans
no dramas
no masks
no skeletons
she doesn't wait for my answer
whatever comes next
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wet
eager
ready
starved for sex
loud and raunchy
return to decadence
'Tremendous Life Satisfaction'
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the mel
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I have learned silence from the talkative, toleration from the tolerant, and kindness from the unkind - yet, strange, i am ungrateful to these teachers. - Khalil Gibran
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Another WTC
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the way we were
as safe as we thought
what are the chances
quite unprepared
search faces
notice behaviour
acutely aware
the actions of a few
condemn a nation
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the mel
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I have learned silence from the talkative, toleration from the tolerant, and kindness from the unkind - yet, strange, i am ungrateful to these teachers. - Khalil Gibran
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WTC
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god is invoked
who will save us this time
judging from the aftermath
homeland security
civil libertarians suspicious
armed guards with grenades
soldiers on city streets
enlisting sentries
maintaining checkpoints
the kind of security we need
police line do not cross
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the mel
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I have learned silence from the talkative, toleration from the tolerant, and kindness from the unkind - yet, strange, i am ungrateful to these teachers. - Khalil Gibran
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Interesting Mel http://www.hostboard.com/ubb/smile.gif
I really liked the first one http://www.hostboard.com/ubb/smile.gif
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Ski Greatest sword fighter in Michigan
Miral's Slave
tyledras's Sidekick
"It's a Detroit thang"
"The man who kissed a ninja lesbian and lived to tell about it."
"Good, Bad.....I'm the guy with the tank"
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Posting old wonderings so i don't loose them.
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there is no one here
none
no one
one one
here
alone
all
all alone all the time
time
all the in the world
we are the people
sheep
people
herd us here
where
we are
we're
where
a place in time
of
state of us
status
us
alone
all of us
alone in the herd of the sheepeople
how to stand so
oh so
high
above
a god below god
we are all of what we are
the sum of us
of me
and you
and you
and her and him and her
all the people
him there
her here
here
wherever we all are
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the mel
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If a man could understand all the horror of the lives of ordinary people who are turning around in a circle of insignificant interests and insgnificant aims, if he could understand what they are losing, he would understand that there can only be one thing that is serious for him - to escape from the general life, to be free. - G.I. Gurdjieff
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an elvis impersonator
through the motions once more
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hiv-positive
threat ignored
death toll rising
we are carrying around what no one knew we had
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anger normal
anguish cleansing
confessing angst and insecurities
promises promises
how obsessively
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the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
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have you read any Jim Carroll? i think you'd probably dig him.
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no gol i haven't. why do you think i'd like him ?
the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
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actually, you might like e.e. cummings, too. Depending on what time period you get of his, there's some beautifully structured love poetry, a lot of what almost seems like stream of consciousness, and later on, a lot of political satire-type stuff.
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"Shall I then weep? I cannot; I have no tears left within me.
I can only throw my body upon the indifferent ground
And let it mourn noiselessly." - Hecuba, from Euripides' Trojan Women
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oh.
My Journal
visit if you want.
the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
[This message has been edited by neomel (edited November 08, 2001).]
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I like your stuff, mel. Especially the first collection you posted.
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ah, praise to the aspiringwannabecreator ...
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thanks bran ...
the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
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spaceship earth
wizards and
spooks and
geeks
a circus and a shrine
because it is normal
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gossip is a woman's forte
so trivial
workkidssex
that, at least
is what men believe
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this is ine reaction to a story i read about two teenages killing a homeless drunk by setting him alight.
two schoolboys
vagrantvunerablevictim
firelighters setting fire
intended to kill
stephen brookes 16
john iveson 13
found guilty of murder
"for a laugh"
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the current australian political climate. it's a horrible thing.
interception of a refugee boat
opportunistic
support the governemnt !
excuse for a debate
support the government !
extraordinary lies
(misleading statements)
support the government !
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finally, on terroristnuclear warfare
osama says
if america used
nuclearchemicalweapons
we may retort with
nuclearchemicalweapons
we have a deterrant
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the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
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once again, comment if you want. anything, especially nice thinks, as well as beatmedown criticism occassionally, is appreciated.
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dnaregister
allocation at birth
health
education
wellbeing
needs (needlessdetails)
labrador pedigree ID
number tattooed inside x1094p's ear
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identification intergration
linking information
'mission coordination'
think of the starving millions
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civil liberties
sparking angry responses
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government departments
sharing citizen privacy
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the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
[This message has been edited by neomel (edited November 14, 2001).]
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i don't think before that i actually got a s11 post right. hence, another try.
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brave new york city
in tragic fate
an infamy
a date
they saw aircraft
300 passengers
300 dreams
they
those zealots
saw opportunity
and targets
an impact
an explosion
no
twice
in heroes heartland
falling lives
from falling buildings
scramble
escape
flee
collapse
down goes the twin towers
of freedom
and innocence
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the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
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when I was in grade three
a kid I knew said to me
I don't believe in santa
but I wish I did
the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
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i'd just like to ask you lamech not to dlete this or the daddist thread because i'll be adding more electicallyperiodically ...
thanks !
the mel
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But I like the incovenience
But I don't want comfort
I want God
I want poetry
I want real danger
I want freedom
I want goodness
I want sin
I'm claiming the right to be unhappy
Aldous Huxley
I am, first and foremost, unequivocally, an individual.
