How does the board feel about a brutal prize fight between two four month pregnant women. Too much? Don't know? Don't want to know?
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How does the board feel about a brutal prize fight between two four month pregnant women. Too much? Don't know? Don't want to know?
I cannot speak for the board. To me, the idea is a bit too extreme. I recall that you still have some unfinished stories. One of them that stands out in my mind is the zombie amazon. I wonder if you ever like to develop it.
Speaking for myself, I would love such a work of fiction. I sent you a private email as well.
Would be interesting for sure.
Forget the first reply, yes, that would be hot. Two preggos fighting, trying to kill the baby inside the other. Hot.
Only if the rules forbid attack the belly.
Mr. Cage ... please continue your serie: "On the Road to Mayhem"
yes please
I clearly remember writing a story like this once before; I even posted it among my Sick ideas of the week segment.
It was between two women who both had the same baby daddy but to get the inheritance there could only be one heir or something; I think an indian person asked me to have it be between an indian girl and a british white girl who were office coworkers. The point wasn't to allow belly attacks, like the previous poster mentioned, but after the heat of battle it soon turned into it. The thing I didn't like writing was how one woman was trying to milk the other woman's breasts so that way if she won she wouldn't be able to produce enough for her child but I find breast milk kinda gross--just my hangup--so I didn't go all the way with it but it did eventually turn into trying to attack the other woman's fetus/belly in order to force a miscarriage.
It sounds fucked up but this is just fiction and I like exploring taboo subjects.
Stone
i'd love to see them punching and kicking each other's round belly, or even slam them together hard.
myabe you could give them something to beat them with....bats, sticks, whips,...
This is nothing I'd be interested in
Maybe a deathmatch so the focus is on the woman not the child? Obviously the collateral damage possibilities are substantial
The sharing of any subject matter on this board should be encouraged. If a board visitor doesn't like the subject matter then they should pass it by. We all have our personal quirks, and variety being the spice of life there will be some we as individuals will steer clear of. Go for it Stone. I might not read it, but I'll defend to the death your right to post it. :-)
I agree with erik72. Please continue that series, Mr. Cage.Quote:
Originally Posted by erik72
He did ask for opinions.
@Kidman,
Where did you post the fight story? On your yahoo club? I didn't see one on the sick idea post.
Speaking for myself, I love the idea. I have always been a big fan of your writing Mr. Cage. I also agree with catwatcher on being able to post anything. This is an open space. If I read something I don't like, I simply stop reading and switch to something else.
@Kidman, nevermind, found it and it was great, along with all the work you do on your yahoo group. Thanks!
In real life, my cousin runs ante-natal classes and she did have to separate 2 quite heavily pregnant women in her class after they got into a heated argument over a parking space outside. It got to the point where the 2 women were standing belly to belly and were actually jostling their bellies together as they tried to grab each others hair. At this point my cousin stepped in to separate them.
In a fantasy scenario, I have thought about 2 rival women giving birth side by side to babies fathered by the same man, and after cutting their umbilical cords the women tie the cords together and immediately fight it out. Even pushing their after-births and fluids into each others bodies during the fight.
Hi there!
Maybe not to everybody's taste but definitely a story line that I would relish reading...... The more brutal the better!
yeah cage you gotta post it here, i want to read it asapQuote:
Originally Posted by Gref
I'd love the story...maybe make the families watch, and have the loser submit first, then the winner goes for the "kill"...literally.Quote:
Originally Posted by deity17313