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Okay, so this is kind of out of left field, since when you get right down to it I'm appealing to a group of strangers, but with enough friends thrown in to break my fall.
I write really bad fiction. Usually I write really bad fiction about bands and rock stars that already exist, which for obvious reasons could never be printed. Now I'm starting one that while still entirely in my head is based on real people, actually contains fictional characters, and I'm looking for opinions.
It's only a few pages long so far, so basically I am just looking for critiques and perhaps suggestions.
Oh, and it's purely coincidence (giggle) that the drummer's name is Jonni Jade. It's a vague comparison between the character and the real person (and there hasn't been character development yet, anyway), but he got a chuckle out of it, so maybe you guys would too.
And on the subject of names, NAME MY PRETEND BASSIST.
The band is called (for now) Viscera. The members (so far) are Vivian (Viv) Gage (singer), Jonni Jade (drummer), and Alex (Marxie) Marx (guitarist). Now I just need a bassist. And someone to feel like reading this tripe.
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I have to say guys get sugar to send you the story so far it is very good, and btw i only bear a very small resemblance to the other JJ in the story LOL
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well in my mind he LOOKS exactly like you, but i can't write in a british accent nor do i really have any idea what you crazy people in california do.
but hey, your character is SO gonna get laid.
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OK actually the character is just like me..LOL
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then you'd better pick up a speed habit and find yourself a hot and willing redhead.
um.
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lol know any willing redheads by any chance?
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<---------------, dumbass.
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<font color="#FF0000" size="1">[ October 19, 2004 03:27 AM: Message edited by: Nurse Sugar ]</font>
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you went all speechless on me, right where do i get a speed habit started then....hold on BRB
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right just stole a ferarri, i'm ready...oh hold on you didn't mean that kind of speed habit did you?
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well, no, but i'm sure all of the guys in the story have *that* speed habit, too.
and maybe both speed habits are even worse together than they are separately.
but you're still missing a willing redhead.
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I thought you said the dumbass in the picture was a willing redhead...LOL (i'll get an email beating for that one later)
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you WANKER.
but you would have laughed to see me sitting here in my pjs, mouth agape that you called me a dumbass.
HENCE THE COMMA, DUMBASS.
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Wow...this is almost like watching "The Dating Game".
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yeah except at the end of the night someone usually gets invited in to someone else's bed at the end of the show.
