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My sexfight stories reviews
I?ve decided to write some brief comments about some sexfight stories I?ve been reading recently, as if I was some kind of critic. I don?t want to sound pretentious: these are just a few notes about what I liked and what not, so with some luck somebody will find this guide useful.
I pretend to be updating the list from time to time, and I?d be pleased if you comment with your own thoughts.
One last thing: I?ll try not to do spoilers.
Wet. Wild. Writhing. By Caitlin Norrell.
The last story from Caitlyn Norrell is way longer than her previous stories and she takes full advantage of that to write a hot, tense duel with some interruptions that makes the build up great. The story confronts a ?sexfight actress? against a stripper, first in a swimming pool where they have a brief struggle that ends without winner or decisive moves. After that their rivalry evolves and Chelsea, the actress, go after Chandler to her workplace. There?s a hot long duel in a private room that doesn?t finish their battle, so they set a date in the swimming pool again for the final showdown.
And although that final showdown is well written and is as hot as we can expect, there?s no end, since after some furious battle the girls decide to move to a room? and the story ends without telling us what happens there.
I suppose there?s a second story on the works to continue since the point the story stops, but I would like to read it in the same text. Or make the swimming pool scene complete.
Anyway, there?s enough action in the story to satisfy me, and of course is worth the price. Maybe it?s not as good as I hate you, the first from Norrell stories, but it?s better than the most of them. If you haven?t read it, give it a try.
Furious catfight. By Julia Vargas.
I?ve read this story in its Spanish version, Pelea de gatas.
The story is about a rich brat girl, some kind of Paris Hilton chick, that wants to keep her fame at all costs. As she tries to make up with the hottest film star in a party, named Michael (Fassbender?) she finds a rival in an innocent young starlet (not described as an ex-Disney, but that?s the impression it gave to me) that also wants a love story with Michael.
They lock in a fierce catfight in the bathroom but the fight quickly evolves to a steamy sexfight where the two girls attack each other with all they have.
The story advances slowly at first, as we read about the dirty life of the rich girl character for many pages (there?s no fights but sex scenes), but the action quickens once the party starts and the are some very nice details that makes the story great, as a duel between the girls unnoticed by Michael even when he?s right there.
There?s a nice contrast between the two girls and one can feel the intensity of their hatred that grows during the brawl. I would have liked a longer fight, but the story is worth the price.
P.S. Oh, and I love the cover.
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Cool idea, you can mini review even stories you see here.
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So if I purchase these, it is download ebooks?
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finglock
Cool idea, you can mini review even stories you see here.
Thank you. My first thought was to offer a little advise to those stories that are being sold, but maybe I can do it with other stories as well.
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So if I purchase these, it is download ebooks?
Yes, they are ebooks that can be viewed with devices that support the Kindle app: smartphones, tablets, computers and of course the Kindle itself. I don't know if these books are being sold in other platforms, maybe they are.
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I see, is there any way other than Kindle to get these stories?
It seems I am restricted in my country to get it.
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I don't know if they are available in other platforms. I am surprised Kindle is restricted in your country. Which is your country?
P.S. I'm not sure if this is the problem, but maybe you'd have to look for the ebooks in the Amazon site of your country. Discard the links I provided and simply look the ebooks for their names. Hope it helps you.
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Thank you. My first thought was to offer a little advise to those stories that are being sold, but maybe I can do it with other stories as well.
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Yes, they are ebooks that can be viewed with devices that support the Kindle app: smartphones, tablets, computers and of course the Kindle itself. I don't know if these books are being sold in other platforms, maybe they are.
Hey, could you possibly review the stuff I have on here and let me know what you think?
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Yes, i'll PM you when I read them.
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I resume my critic career with two more reviews.
Sexual scratch, by Caitlyn Norrel.
A new Caitlyn Norrel story. The longer I’ve read from her (about 40 pages). It takes place in a Pool club when a hot girl, Megan, finds her boyfriend is interested in a sultry waitress, Jacklyn, dressed in lingerie (that’s her uniform).
They rival in the pool room with the man himself present in a long and a bit weird back and forth staring duel, taunting each other in many ways while the boy stands there. That’s a strange sequence because although their rivalry grows and you can feel it there’s really no reason to do it in that place in that ways. The man finally goes without suspecting and the girls go to the bathroom for a first and hot battle until everybody leaves the bar. Then they go again to the pool room and finish the battle, that has a clear winner.
As always, there’s a lot of trash talk between the girls, there is a lot of duels and Norrel makes a good work building up the rivalry and confronting the girls. The only complain I have is that she doesn’t use the pool game as she could and it’s a bit under used -and that’s strange since she’s the one that have chosen the scenario-. Also there’s no track of the boy in the girls minds once he has parted.
Anyway, I liked the story very much, and although the develop is, I think, bellow the level of her Wet. Wild. Writhing story, the end is clearly superior.
Worth the buy without doubt.
Contact sports, by various authors
I bought this long book (about 200 pages) hoping that there would be some good sexfights in it (it has a tagline talking about “erotic fighting sports”), but the book is more focused in catfights and wrestling and, more than that, in the femdom that follows after the fight.
If you like femdom and humiliation, this book is written for you, because the fights are usually a brief excuse to lead to the stakes payment. I am not an expert on femdom so I won’t comment on the quality of its stories (it’s not a novel but an anthology), but I thought it was well written in general. It doesn’t appeal me, unfortunately, but if you like femdom I think it’s a good buy. If you are looking for fights or specifically sexfights, this book will dissapoint you.
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Sexual Scratch looks good--too bad it is only available (in English!) on Spanish amazon! Hope it comes to regular amazon soon...
And hope it gives a price in Dollars not Euros
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Oddly enough, none of the books are available for purchase in my country's Amazon site. Any other sites I can buy em?
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Sexual Scratch looks good--too bad it is only available (in English!) on Spanish amazon! Hope it comes to regular amazon soon...
It is available in Amazon.com. Follow this link although the cover is different to the one I have.
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Oddly enough, none of the books are available for purchase in my country's Amazon site. Any other sites I can buy em?
I've made a quick search and haven't found other sites. I thought once you publish an ebook in Amazon is available in all the Amazon sites. I know this could sound dumb, but, have you tried to search in your Amazon site? I mean, not following the link I provided. I think you can't buy any ebook from the Spanish Amazon if you are living in France, for example.
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It is available in Amazon.com. Follow
this link although the cover is different to the one I have.
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I've made a quick search and haven't found other sites. I thought once you publish an ebook in Amazon is available in all the Amazon sites. I know this could sound dumb, but, have you tried to search in your Amazon site? I mean, not following the link I provided. I think you can't buy any ebook from the Spanish Amazon if you are living in France, for example.
My country doesn't have an Amazon site of its own. I've always just bought from the normal Amazon site. I followed the link you sent me and it says "This product is not available for purchase."
So...I can't buy it in my country?
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Thanks Palomajara! Interesting--it is not searchable on amazon, doesn't show up under the "sexfight" or "caitlyn norrel" search like Norrel's other books.
That's strange. I found it searching for "catfight" on Amazon.es and for the specific title on Amazon.com. Now I've made a test and it's really weird. If you look for Caitlyn Norrel there are only 9 results. But if after that you click on the Kindle tag it shows the Caitlyn Norrel list of Kindle books... and there are 10 titles! Including the one we are talking about.
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My country doesn't have an Amazon site of its own. I've always just bought from the normal Amazon site. I followed the link you sent me and it says "This product is not available for purchase."
So...I can't buy it in my country?
Including this link? Then I don't know what the problem is. There seems to be a lot of strange things about this book!
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That's strange. I found it searching for "catfight" on Amazon.es and for the specific title on Amazon.com. Now I've made a test and it's really weird. If you look for Caitlyn Norrel there are only 9 results. But if after that you click on the Kindle tag it shows the Caitlyn Norrel list of Kindle books... and there are 10 titles! Including the one we are talking about.
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Including this link? Then I don't know what the problem is. There seems to be a lot of strange things about this book!
Yeah, that link doesn't work for me. I reached out to Amazon and apparently they don't sell it in my country. Which means that your reviews are all I've got to go on with. Keep with it man, and thanks!
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Another short review.
Just Jealous, by Clio Jones
Very very short story (officially 9 pages, but that includes some excerpts of other stories by the same author) that starts when a girl accepts to have a threesome with her boyfriend and his ex. The girls meet at a bar, there’s an instant dislike and they start to catfight after a few taunts. They are separated and thrown to the passage behind the bar, where they start to make up.
Not very much of a fight or a sexfight there. In fact the story it’s so short there’s not very much of anything. I guess this is only a part of a larger story and that’s why the book says it’s “a taste of Clio Jones”
It could be useful to have a clue about how the author writes, but I don’t think it’s worth the buy, even at its cheap price.
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Top producer, by Casey Grant
Chloe wants to pass an interview to work for a wealthy man, Mr. Rand. However, her interviewer, Madeline, is very picky and it seems she’s not going to get the job, but Mr. Rand accepts Chloe. And that’s when the trouble really starts, because Chloe and Madeline have to compete for their wealthy boss and his cock. Chloe and Madeline engage in a fight that soon turns a sexfight as they try to outdo the other and keep the better job they’ve ever had.
The fight itself is brief but well done. The story would like more to those of you that enjoy messy stuff and some hummiliating themes. Anyway, the story is cheap enough to give it a shot. BUT the book seems to have disappeared from Amazon catalog, I don’t know the reason (maybe doing some corrections?). There are some other stories of the same author, though, although I’ve not read them.
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Two more reviews!
The seashore by Anubisx and M.Petri
If you’ve read already any of Anubisx’s stories you know what will you find in this epic tale about two women that rivalry for a whole week when they meet in a beach. No surprises in this novel that gives you exactly what you are looking for. As always, Anubisx describes with a lot of details the duel of two hot and even chicks that tangle in a long row of assaults as they match their bodies, part by part, inch by inch.
The fight is ferocious and very even, a long struggle that surely you’ll love and you’ll find yourself rooting for one girl as they battle in many ways. It’s worth the price, just 5 euros for more than 400 pages (yes: 400 pages; impressive work). It's a bargain.
You can buy the book here.
Hatred and Lust: The Better Seductress Book 2, by Caitlyn Norrell
Another story by prolific author Caitlyn Norrell. This is a sequel to The better seductress, an unusual story for Norrell since it was set in a world where there are witches that uses actual magic. In the first part, two young witches fought in a sexfight to drain the other magic and have the chance to seduce Julius Caesar. In this sequel, the defeated seeks for revenge, pushed by her witch mistress, and the two young women engage again in a desperate fight for supremacy.
This second story is in fact better than the first one. The rivalry between the girls is better drawn and we can sense the hate between the two enemies. Also the story is longer (about 35 pages) and has some interesting added details. The magic is more important in this fight and the author explores some bondage themes (although she doesn’t take it to their last consequences). I’m sure there will be a third story involving these characters.
Worth the price (just 1 euro) for the quality of the story. You can buy it here.
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PDF version of stories will be very nice
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Thanks PalomaJara for the nice review of The Seashore, but I'm not the only writer of the e-book: M.Petri is the co-writer, and an amazing one!
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Thanks PalomaJara for the nice review of The Seashore, but I'm not the only writer of the e-book: M.Petri is the co-writer, and an amazing one!
You are right; my mistake. I've corrected briefly the post and I hope M. Petri forgives me. Where can I find more of her/his stories?
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You are right; my mistake. I've corrected briefly the post and I hope M. Petri forgives me. Where can I find more of her/his stories?
The Seashore is the first Petri's story... but it won't be the last one :)
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Two more reviews.
Sexual surrender: Better seductress 3, by Caitlyn Norrell
The third story in the series changes one of the contenders, as one of the women in the former chapter was soundly defeated and the winner is challenged by her mistress.
Not too many surprises in this new story. Again there are some magic details, although they work more as a background than having an actual weight in the story. The fight is as well executed as we are used to in Caitlyn Norrell. I miss some of the chemistry that we found in the second chapter, but either way is a good story.
Worth the price again. You can buy it here.
Betrayal, by Caitlyn Norrel
Yes, again her. I was looking for a link to the Seductress book when I found she had another new story and a new serie. I am almost sure this is a new serie, since the end, although it?s clear, gives us a slight hint of be ready for a sequel. And I?d like it very much.
Betrayal is set in a world where there?s a organization that is looking for a magic pendant (again that fantasy edge many Norrel?s stories have). Once the pendant is found they send Selena, a beautiful warrior, to recover it; but there?s a traitor in the organization (from another rival organization? not clear yet), Selena?s best friend Brianna? until they both competed for a man.
After a hot brief struggle in the headquarters they meet again in the temple that guards the pendant and there they engage in a hot, steamy long sexfight full of chemistry and hate. Very well done even if there isn?t anything really surprising in the fight.
I liked it much more than Seductress 3, anyway, and of course it?s worth the price. And you can buy it here.
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The Seashore is the first Petri's story... but it won't be the last one :)
I hope so
Seashore is magnificent story my favirite
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I love that there's a Caitlyn Norrel writing sex fight stories for amazon...but at the same time I feel like I reached my limit on what he/she can present--the last one I read was about two girls in a bar who stay after closing for a sex fight--exactly what I like, fairly realistic, but somehow just lacks the intensity I was looking for. Wet, Wild and Writhing was the last one I liked--fairly good all the way through and with a perfect setup for a sequel but the author hasn't returned to that setup. On the other hand I just don't have any interest in the magic/fantasy scenarios. I'm at least glad that Norrel is prolific and the books are very cheap so at some point I'm sure they'll do another one I like.
I don't mind fantasy or magic scenarios, and in her stories they seem to use more as backgrounds than to have any real effect in the story, but I know what you are saying and probably you are right. I have the feeling she has found a formula to write -or has found what appeals her most- and she doesn't move from that. Sometimes she seems to be on cruising speed. That's why I like when she adds some new details, as the bondage in Seductress 2, or the beginning in the last one, Betrayal.
Wet wild and writhing was designed to have a sequel -in fact i thought the end was very abrupt- but haven't arrived yet, although I'm sure she will eventually write it, because the story is actually yelling for a follow up.
What I think is lost from the first stories is some kind of intensity, as you say, specially in the build ups of the stories, at the beginning; in the I hate you stories, for example, there was really a way to describe the hate and rivalry between the girls that make me see how it was growing when i was reading it. That finesse now is forgotten; well, not forgotten because Norrel is very careful to describe the hate between the rivals, but it is not so... proved as it was in the earlier stories.
However, as I've wrote in my reviews, the stories are worth the price, I think. Even the worse ones are crafted and are enjoyable. For my tastes, of course.
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Thanks for posting the reviews, I purchased Caitlyn Norrel's stories and I am now a big fan of her work.
I hope the Seashore is soon up for sale on Amazon.com so I can download it to my kindle (after all one of my favs of all time Spontaneous Combustion is up for sale on Amazon. A great story! Purchase that book and you won't be disappointed. Anubis created an epic tale of two woman caught in each others orbit of hate and envy. Well worth the price of admission
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Yes, like I said, I'm glad someone's doing it--the Indian and most of the other stories that try to work in the genre on amazon are pretty much all terrible. Actually "Furious Catfight" by Julia Vargas gets pretty good by the end and she just put another one up, Bitches on a Plane. So there's some kind of market for this stuff. I'll read the other Norrel stories just to see if there's anything decent in there...
Reading it now!
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Bitches on a plane, by Julia Vargas
This is the second story from Julia Vargas I've read and I liked more than the first (the first took a lot of time to get to the point; here the interest comes soon in the story). As we can read in Amazon:
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Valeria, a blond gorgeous chick, finds an unpleasant surprise in her trip to New York: her sexy arch rival Paula, the woman she rivaled with for an old lover, has a seat next to her on the plane. The two bitter rivals are pushed against each other during the fly until their clash is inevitable, and they engage in a fierce struggle trying not to get caught by the rest of the passage.
The best part in the story is how they fight in silence, surrounded by the other passengers of the flight. They have a very rough titfight, using their hands, in their seats, covered by a blanket, then a hot fingerfucking battle in the restroom and they engage in a final battle in their seats again. The fights are really intense and fierce and there?s a lot of trashtalking involved between both women -hissed, as they can?t make too much noise. The author has success showing us the savage hatred between the rivals, you can feel it clearly when you read it.
One thing I found curious is that the author changes the POV from one girl to another; first you root for one girl, then for the other, then you understand why the first need to win the fight, later you cheer for the second. Nicely done and works well.
The story ends with a clear winner, but I think it is asking for a sequel, since not all is solved -no more words to avoid a spoiler.
I?ve read the story in its Spanish version, but you can read it in English here. Worth the price for the length of the story (about 60 pages) and its intensity.
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That story was so hot imagine the excitment between these two women "wow" anyone want to roleplay this fight right now.
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I like more PDF Format and and in draw
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A little disappointing it didn't have a tribadism, cunt to cunt fight
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A little disappointing it didn't have a tribadism, cunt to cunt fight
I didn't want to make a spoiler with that, although I insinuated it in my review :) but yeah you are right. Hopefully there will be a sequel where they make their pussies battle directly.
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A couple more:
The better girl wins, by Tara Weston.
Short story -11 pages- that sexfight aficionados would find disappointing. The fight itself is at the beginning of the story, in its first page, and lasts? just that page. After that there is a well written story about a woman making the other submissive. If you like the bitch taming you?ll probably like the story; in case you don?t, I advise you to save your money (just 1 dollar).
Here?s the story if you want to give it a chance, however.
The better cougar, by Tara Weston
Longer (32 pages) and better than the other one, this second story from Tara X has the same defects. It?s not a sexfight story, even if there are some brief battle sin the story. It?s well written, the principal characters, two tough cougars, are cool, and as the author tells us their stories the tension grows and the reader hopes there?s going to be a long, hard fight between them. But the fight is so brief you can?t actually say is a fight.
Lovers of submission stories will find it great, i?m sure, but I don?t get touched by that fetish, so I thought it was a good chance wasted.
The book costs 3 dollars; you won?t find enough fights to justify the prize, in my opinion. Of course, if you like submission stories, I think this is a good one, as the story is well written.
You can buy it here.
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Last woman standing, by Caitlyn Norrell.
The last book from Caitlyn Norrel is the longest one so far, almost 80 pages. Also the most expensive, if 3 dollars could be expensive.
Here Miss Norrell writes about a 4 woman sexfight. Two friends go to a party and they find there another couple that rivalize with them since some years. A fight ensues (one on one) and after some hot struggle the girls exchange their adversaries. So in fact it?s not a two against two but one on one duels followed by another set of one on one duels between the girls. As always, Norrell is very professional, but I expected more of the situation. There is some lack of build up and in fact all the girls seemed a bit the same girl.
Anyway, the book is worth the price. You can buy it here.
After hours, by M.Petri and Anubisx
A short story profusely illustrated with 3D pictures, After hours is the story of two young neighbours that finally have the chance to resolve a long-going rivalry. First they have a face off in a disco and later in the gym of the building they both live in. The action is fast and well paced, the tension and rivalry between the girls are exquisitely written and the fight itself is great. There?s a good work with the pictures, too.
The book is 4,99 dollars and it?s worth the price (35 pages). You can buy it here.
Girl fight, by Dalia Daudelin
Disappointing story. The description says: "Kandee Aaron is finally graduating from high school. She's 18, sexy as hell, and dangerous.
Her eyes are set on getting one last conquest in before she leaves for college: Jack. The hottest guy in the whole school.
She tries to seduce him on the dance floor, and things go all wrong. Another girl, Jessica, accidentally feels Kandee up and Kandee causes a scene. Not wanting to get into a fight, she opts to leave the party instead.
Jessica follows her out, though. Pulling her into a dark alley, they both fight for dominance until their baser, sexier interests win out."
And this is almost all you get of the fight. There is a fight of about one page. Then there?s some sex action.
Although officially the book is 45 pages long, in fact the story is only about 10 pages. The rest is composed by sneak previews of other books.
The prize is 3 dollars and it?s not worth it. You can buy it here, but I advise you humbly not to do it.
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Thanks for the review!
Really good work, congrats!
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I am always having trouble purchasing these stories
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Norell has a twitter?
I just got the book, I havent read it
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Another couple of stories reviewed:
In the Master's bedroom, by Caitlyn Norrel
Another shot in the prolific career of Caitlyn Norrel, this 50 pages story has a new element. Although in many stories from Norrel there was a man character that was the reason to fight for the girls, in this new story the man himself is present during the fight and even has a remarkably importance in the struggle.
As usually, the fight is well done, although the author uses some tricks that would be well known by her loyal fans. Not much of a build up in the story, as the girls, two maids of a wealthy Indian man, are in their master's bedroom to fight for him, being led by a maid that seemed to have greater influence in the story that she finally had. After some rounds, the master comes into the bedroom and witnesses (and participates in) the following struggles, until there is a clear winner.
The story costs one euro and it's worth the buy. You can find it here.
Marco is mine, bitch, by Julia Vargas
I've read the Spanish version of this story. There's an English version as well.
When I reviewed the last story from Julia Vargas, Bitches on a plane, I said it was yelling for a sequel. Well, here it is, and I think it's even a better story than the first one. Way longer -about 100 pages-, Marco is mine starts one day after Bitches on a plane ended. Valeria finally is with the man both girls want and is enjoying her prize. But she feels unsatisfied and soon it's obvious Paula is eager to look for a rematch as well, so both chicks embark in two ways that will make them clash again.
The girls compete with each other at distance at first, with some hot scenes in which the girls rival using their phones, making the tension grow to unbearable peaks. There are a lot of great details in this build up that make the story richer and nastier than the original story. One thing that I found interesting, specially after reading Norrel's story: although the women are competing for a man, in Vargas' story they use him as an excuse to fight or a weapon to hurt the rival -the girls fight in private, no presence of Marco in their struggles-. It's the hate for each other, more than the rivalry for a man, what's make the build up as great as this.
Finally, the women meet, first in a bathroom -Julia Vargas seems to have a thing with restrooms: the three stories I read so far from her have almost one scene in the bathroom- and later they engage in a long, grudge sexfight, very well executed, that is the perfect end to the women's rivalry (for those who were missing a pussy to pussy duel in the former Bitches on a plane, I think they'll be satisfied with the steaming pussy combat in this sequel). Although I think there's a chance of another sequel to this sequel, I'm not sure if it will be another one.
Marco is mine, bitch, costs 3 euros and it's worth its price. You can find it here.