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The couples met on campus yet the guys play on rival college football teams? Sorry, that ruined the suspension of disbelief needed to follow the story.
Very enjoyable read, I look forward to more writing from you.
Thanks for the kind words and encouragement, and thanks for pointing out the incongruity. Fixed that. Never did make the football team myself.
Not a fan of mixed but loved the fem v fem asian white tussle here! Hope to see more from you in the future.
It's always exciting to read or see an Asian/White sexfight.
Unbelievably hot, great writing!
Liked the theme of this story - couple vs. couple.
I wish other writers would give some thought to
adding a story of this theme to their to do list.
My first post.... must go out to you for an awesome story.
Being Asian, the story hit hard..... in a smokin hot way.
Aloha from Hawaii USA.
I'm sorry to see this taken down, Chronos. It was a favorite. I hope you repost it, and continue with sequels at some point...