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A good start. I look forward to reading more of it.
A good start indeed! Looks like another well written, sexy tale coming from you, Kama. Looking forward to part two.
A.P.
really means a lot, coming from a natural talent like you, apenman.Quote:
Originally Posted by apenman
A wonderful and detail build-up, just the way I love it !
Looking forward to next chapter
Johannes
Nice Start
Hope will be more !
More than good... EXCELLENT !!
Kama, last years (maybe my age speaks here) i focus not only in the erotic scenes but also in the plot. Of course I do not underestimate a hot, juicy, erotic scene. :)
Anyway... you are a "plot master", all your recent stories have a terrific plot and this is not an exception. You are also a master to build the erotic tension between the two women which will escalate until their sexfight. This is the reason i like your stories that much !!
Of course there are many women in your story, many combinations may be present in your next chapters. Starting yto know your style, i will not surprised if a mystery or a spy action or anything will be present too.
In other words... A VERY PROMISING START !!
I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR CH. 2 !
A.S.A.P. please
Kama first if all thanks.
The Indian chubbiness and humidity and sweat is always there in your stories and I love it.
I am too small to request you to put in the angle of fighting in front of a common love but I still do so.
Do remember even sisters are possessive about the brother... I loved it when her caring brother hugged her.
If at all, if at all ... If you can enter the possessiveness of a sister to have monopoly sex rights over a brother and her love to die for him and tears in all 3 eyes in end...
I will be obliged.
I will also be ok if you don't because it is your hard work and will always respect you.
Just a wishful thinking.
Possessiveness and tears of love while fighting where the brother is just conjoined has such an mesmerising touch that we just get knocked out reading it.
God bless you.
i had an idea recently that is similar to this one recently. dont know when i'll get to it, rudraxian. but my story could be set in the US and not texas. thank you for your kind words.Quote:
If at all, if at all ... If you can enter the possessiveness of a sister to have monopoly sex rights over a brother and her love to die for him and tears in all 3 eyes in end...
nice :DQuote:
Originally Posted by kamafight