Re: Licensed to Fuck: Part 7
That was a very hot and entertaining story! Loved the dynamic between Jaimie and Hitomi and I'd say Stacy did fit in perfectly, too. I was wondering if you'd bring that mysterious flag up again or if you wanted to save it for a possible sequel. As a minor bit of criticism I think this was quite an info dump at the very end where a small teaser would have done the job as well. But then again I'm that kind of author who prefers to leave some threads open to spark the imagination of the readers, even if it is not to everyone's liking.
Re: Licensed to Fuck: Part 7
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Originally Posted by
herbert3000
That was a very hot and entertaining story! Loved the dynamic between Jaimie and Hitomi and I'd say Stacy did fit in perfectly, too. I was wondering if you'd bring that mysterious flag up again or if you wanted to save it for a possible sequel. As a minor bit of criticism I think this was quite an info dump at the very end where a small teaser would have done the job as well. But then again I'm that kind of author who prefers to leave some threads open to spark the imagination of the readers, even if it is not to everyone's liking.
Fair enough. I guess it was my way of building suspense to the sequel and making the villainous group seem intimidating. Anyway, I’ll take a break for Easter before I get to work on the sequel and this sequel will be the longest continuous story I’ve ever done. At least close to 30 parts. It will also be third person for reasons you’ll see. That being said, the story is so long that it will likely take up the rest of 2024 for me, so at times I will take breaks from it to focus on other smaller ideas I have.
Re: Licensed to Fuck: Part 7
Hot story. I am glad that it will continue, as you wrote, in another story.
Stacy and Jamie got into trouble with the “Bringers of Light” cult, we're waiting to see how they untangle.
Little by little, you are building your own "universe" in your stories. They are action stories where the dominant form of action is erotic.
Interesting universe, especially as you have adorned it with hot heroines.
The story, as you write, will last long enough, taking occasional breaks with some different and smaller stories.
This hot form of variation is also good news.
I am optimistic that you will find the way to bring the 732 team to play a role as well, also a few heroines from other stories.
As for the length of this story... 30 more chapters ? All of 2024 ? ONLY ? LOL.
You and your stories are now a "must read" here. Rest a little, you deserve it, and come back refreshed.
But don't leave us waiting for too long for the new story/sequel !
We are more than ready to welcome chapter 1 !
Re: Licensed to Fuck: Part 7
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YuriLesboLover
this sequel will be the longest continuous story I’ve ever done.
Wow! Coming from you this really means something... :D
Re: Licensed to Fuck: Part 7
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Originally Posted by
Giannis-CB
Hot story. I am glad that it will continue, as you wrote, in another story.
Stacy and Jamie got into trouble with the “Bringers of Light” cult, we're waiting to see how they untangle.
Little by little, you are building your own "universe" in your stories. They are action stories where the dominant form of action is erotic.
Interesting universe, especially as you have adorned it with hot heroines.
The story, as you write, will last long enough, taking occasional breaks with some different and smaller stories.
This hot form of variation is also good news.
I am optimistic that you will find the way to bring the 732 team to play a role as well, also a few heroines from other stories.
As for the length of this story... 30 more chapters ? All of 2024 ? ONLY ? LOL.
You and your stories are now a "must read" here. Rest a little, you deserve it, and come back refreshed.
But don't leave us waiting for too long for the new story/sequel !
We are more than ready to welcome chapter 1 !
You’ll just have to wait and see.