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    If I had one wish to make..
    I would wish to be the skin upon your lips..
    For then I could kiss you every day of your life

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    Excellent. Many people say they cant write poetry, and I suspect they havnt tried too hard. Both the poems you sent us today (Ilove them both) were very short, yet very well done. For folks that think they cant write poetry, it doesnt have to be like writing a book. Some times just a few lines can be as moving as an entire page. Thanks shanti! [img]graemlins/idea.gif[/img]

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