bellyaching

[gollum]

uhh...yeah. *shrug* -g

bellyaching

i can feel it
in the tightening of
my toes, in the way it
feels like stretching
a rubber band when i
curl my toes or bend
my knee. i can feel
the swelling
starting, can feel the
tightness of my
digits turning to
my friends the
pink sausage-type
units.

i elevate my leg,
sinking my spirits.

it could be worse,
i tell myself.

my toes don't believe me.
they get like this
sometimes.

[Banan Etoile]

Needs some work with that imagery there...but a start.

[erisesoteric]

Yeah, but I like it...

especially the last three lines...