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[Anonymous Writer]

wow
thats great
Sarcasm
you must think
that youre so
Clever
that youre
Better
than the rest of
us because you actually
Think
and oh no we
Never
do because then you wouldnt have
anything to hold
Above
us like you always do...

[jones]

I'm split on this one. It's angry, but it also comes off really passive-aggressive. If that's what you're going for, don't change a word.

take care

---jones

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