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    a poem:

    sparkling Miss Sol is precious as a bright
    stone set alone in the sky
    and she can still dazzle like the brilliant
    bolting of a New World thrush--

    lonely, vibrant Miss Sol,
    keeps looking in the glass for an even
    brighter chess partner
    for since we came splashing
    from the ocean we have watched
    the old maid play solitaire
    with a trillion card deck

    laying day over night over day over
    night over day over night over
    day over night
    over day over night over
    day
    over
    night

    1996

    take care

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    Nice. Cheers me up a bit. Thanks.

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    Cool one jones. I like the card deck reference.

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    Shivers.

    I like it.

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    That poem really played with my mind, all the changing scenery in such a cheerful way. The way it ended was genius. Pure genius

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