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    Man-spider?

    tarantella tarantella deep into the night
    dance and kiss of the spider, but beware of his bite

    bittersweet frozen glimmers of venom
    as he glides you cross the floor
    as he guides you through your doom
    gladly you oblige
    grip of seduction
    grip of desire

    as deadly as a vampire
    and every bit hypnotic
    an addiction attraction
    murderous in its fate
    nightmarish in its nature
    impossible to resist
    surrender to him
    he offers sweet slaughter

    waiting waiting at all times, waiting at all hours
    for fresh sanguine flesh for him to shred and deflower

    to catch its prey as it flits by ignorant
    dripping fangs concealed by soft lips
    he'll crush you and show no mercy
    the rapture of the rhythm of legs...arms....body
    charming as he kills
    bestowing great sensuality
    kisses of death
    kisses of fire

    daddy sexy long legs
    creeping lightly almost invisible
    sees all with multi gleams
    of eyes which watch patiently
    and he knows a good catch
    his focus knows no limit
    piercing stares intent on the prize

    smoothness of a breeze
    whisping past him, he moves
    sharply! always ready for
    a lightning reaction
    "who's there?
    what's that?
    fight or flight?
    i'll take you before you take me..."

    a cunning, knavish opponent
    prestissimo!
    he who is foolish enough to rile him
    is destined for digestion
    before realization
    of the wrapping of his viscous death shroud
    of the sinking of carnassial fangs
    of the sucking consumption of his victim's very life

    tarantino tarantino such resplendent fright
    dance and kiss of the spider, deep into the night



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    Smile

    I like it. Interesting structure. Was this originally a song?

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    thank you, im glad you like it smile

    no, it wasn't a song, although lately i've been trying to pay attention to syllables and rhythm in my writing....thanks for your feedback *G

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