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February 28th, 2001, 11:16 PM
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Man-spider?
tarantella tarantella deep into the night
dance and kiss of the spider, but beware of his bite
bittersweet frozen glimmers of venom
as he glides you cross the floor
as he guides you through your doom
gladly you oblige
grip of seduction
grip of desire
as deadly as a vampire
and every bit hypnotic
an addiction attraction
murderous in its fate
nightmarish in its nature
impossible to resist
surrender to him
he offers sweet slaughter
waiting waiting at all times, waiting at all hours
for fresh sanguine flesh for him to shred and deflower
to catch its prey as it flits by ignorant
dripping fangs concealed by soft lips
he'll crush you and show no mercy
the rapture of the rhythm of legs...arms....body
charming as he kills
bestowing great sensuality
kisses of death
kisses of fire
daddy sexy long legs
creeping lightly almost invisible
sees all with multi gleams
of eyes which watch patiently
and he knows a good catch
his focus knows no limit
piercing stares intent on the prize
smoothness of a breeze
whisping past him, he moves
sharply! always ready for
a lightning reaction
"who's there?
what's that?
fight or flight?
i'll take you before you take me..."
a cunning, knavish opponent
prestissimo!
he who is foolish enough to rile him
is destined for digestion
before realization
of the wrapping of his viscous death shroud
of the sinking of carnassial fangs
of the sucking consumption of his victim's very life
tarantino tarantino such resplendent fright
dance and kiss of the spider, deep into the night
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March 9th, 2001, 08:05 PM
#2
Inactive Member
I like it. Interesting structure. Was this originally a song?
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March 10th, 2001, 03:29 AM
#3
Inactive Member
thank you, im glad you like it 
no, it wasn't a song, although lately i've been trying to pay attention to syllables and rhythm in my writing....thanks for your feedback *G
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