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November 15th, 2000, 04:27 PM
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creativity etched in kind
a silvery moonlight's dance in mind
whatever a careless star can see
will capture your core and shine for me
like outstretched harmonies unto the dawn
angelic in their wisdom, free from harm
never in your life felt such unity
validation the savior of indentity
satisfied with just a speckle of fire
a plummeting comet breezes soft desire
hearing the breath sigh over the sky
i kiss its cheek as it passes me by
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"they've been going in and out of style....but they're guaranteed to raise a smile"
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November 15th, 2000, 07:03 PM
#2
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i dont usually like rhyming poetry. this was a GREAT exception. i really liked it a lot leo. keep up the good work!
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"What about him? What are you doing with him?"
"What you should be doing with me..."
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I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned
"Om Namaha Shivaya." ~ Dano
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November 16th, 2000, 12:24 AM
#3
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hey! neither do i, usually, and it's a weak spot, so i've been practicing it lately.....thanks for letting me know you liked it, made me smile 
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"they've been going in and out of style....but they're guaranteed to raise a smile"
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