Regret

[dwim]

We'll just let it go
maybe it's better
you're gone-
maybe I can say
this is better
that everything
is just fine
& dandy
to the 'e'
letter-

but the sun is not shining
the flowers don't look so pretty
there's no music in the air
there is nothing left at all-

and I lie-
everything feels like shit
without you.

[Oz]

i didnt understand the "e" part, but ill have to reread. i really like the three lines at the end, telling the truth so shortly and abruptly. tres bien!

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"What about him? What are you doing with him?"
"What you should be doing with me..."

Proud family member of Jelymo, gollum, Kelly, Dano, Jaxom27, Fenix and others.

I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned

"Om Namaha Shivaya." ~ Dano

[dwim]

the 'e' at the end of fine.

[Oz]

got that after a reread but thanks for the clarification. once again, its great!

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"What about him? What are you doing with him?"
"What you should be doing with me..."

Proud family member of Jelymo, gollum, Kelly, Dano, Jaxom27, Fenix and others.

I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned

"Om Namaha Shivaya." ~ Dano