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    Inactive Member Fliptastic29's Avatar
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    Milliseconds slowly tick tock on by...

    But I,
    moving at mach 7 do not sluggishly pass time by.

    Milliseconds, Yes milliseconds are but fallen walls to what i can accomplish.

    Tick.
    I've already looked at my phone 13 times,
    called 2 people,
    thought about how stuck I am in life right now,
    Ate a cheeseburger, chatted with 3 people online, and found classes for next sememster.

    To.
    Looked at my hand 3 times,
    Jiggled my legs twice,
    Touched myself once,
    and Felt the exigency to prevail in something simple. So i decided to read a book, all 3 pages where finished then...

    ck.

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    You said 'jiggled' --- HA!

    and...

    exigency - is that a word? I'll have to look it up... but I dont think it fit very well (because it's so exotic if it is indeed a word)

    the seperating of the 'tock' at the end was a nice idea too.

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    I just reread it and i don't like my repetition of miliseconds and other things. I guess i'm just trying to post more often so that my writers block dissipates. I don't know if it's working. Hopefully it will

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    From the looks of it... your "posting more often" isn't working so well..
    Try and post more, see how that works.

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    I'll try

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