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[Hannibal]

There's an ounce of a lifetime left in these bones,
Fragile bones that like breaking.
And the ounces leak out,
The ounces leak out.

Air from a tire, ounce from a bone.
There's an ounce of a lifetime left in these bones.

Eight pounds of grey, and an ounce of lifetime.

[pixxie]

This sounds like the beginning of a song. It's very lyrical, and the repetition would make it go well with music. Have you thought about trying to turn this into a song?

[Fliptastic29]

My FAVORITE part of this is your usage of the word lifetime. At first it caught me off guard and i had to read the sentence numerous times until it sounded good in my head but after that i fell in love with how you used it.

There's a Coldplay concert in IN on the 12th. Anyones' welcome to come along. Andrew and I were wondering if you wanted to come along. Give me a call.