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    Inactive Member stormy868's Avatar
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    LET ME OUT! I?m stuck in here?
    I want to be free? free?.
    Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

    What they don?t know won?t hurt them I say!
    If only they knew of the evil lurking well below the surface
    The awful, awful things I could do.
    No ? I will keep my cool!

    Down I will push the lurking urges
    Pounding, loudly in my head.
    What is that, you say?
    Pump him full of lead!

    To the depths of my soul I reach to find the true me
    What the HELL DO I SEE?
    A monster trying to get out
    What is this all about?

    Do I really think I can pull it off?
    What the hell, it?s been a wild ride!
    If they only knew the true me they would scoff!
    Because I don?t want to go to jail the law I will abide.

    THE POUNDING, POUNDING, POUNDING IN MY HEAD!
    Sometimes I wish I was dead!
    The pain would go away
    Simply put ? the relief would stay?

    Peace is what I need.
    Tell the voices to STOP!!
    Want to take a wild ride?
    Meow says the kitty to the cop?

    And that's a whole other story...

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    by far one of my favorite lines:

    Meow says the kitty to the cop?
    <font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">but i think this peace needs a lot more imagery. it just seems really simple and like something i've heard before.

    keep writing! [img]smile.gif[/img]

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