keep the ring

[machinery]

no more trample-the-carpet canines
or neat knickknacks kicking ?round.

what pictures were had
were lost in punched glass.

let?s have another
and I?ll take the floor.

keep your ring and I?ll take
the bad credit.

lady, lady, lady,
gone, gone, gone.

[Hannibal]

Stylistically this changes...
The beginning is one way - the middle is different - the end different again.

Not bad though - I like it.

It proceeds down a path, much like the content of which it speaks about.

At the point with keeping the ring, it seems very surreal and clear.

The end muddled/confused, the beginning - ordinary. Typically you.

[machinery]

define the styles. and what style works the best?

the ending is confusing? is that a good thing?

oh, typical me.