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**rose** · August 24th, 2001, 05:14 PM

Dreary and misty
moors of England,
green earth all around-
shades of multiple
skimming the hills,
water flowing through the moat-
forrest in the core,
beautiful willow borders
blowing with the wind,
the sky seems the lightest-
blue and gray,
brown bark and yellow tints
blending so well
almost as a painters brush,
and, seemingly admist it all
a calmness between human and earth
as one.
~A~

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**Hannibal** · August 24th, 2001, 05:19 PM

National Geographic is the first thing that popped into my little brain on this one. It seems to be a descriptive poem about the world you see and the world surrounding you. It was good if that was your intention, but I failed to see anything past that. Was there intended to be something more?? I ask because most of the time there is an underlying story, or word in my poetry, so i was mearly asking... let me know what was going on with this one. The descriptions were very well put, but could've used a bit more elaboration I felt. I saw it, but, it was blurry.

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**rose** · August 24th, 2001, 05:22 PM

ok go look out at the "look out" if u are where u were. its suppse to be blurry. i just sat in the caf and looked outside today. no hidden meaning or major definition. just nature at its finest.

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**Hannibal** · August 24th, 2001, 05:25 PM

Ahh okay. "The Lookout" was the inspiration behind this. Then I give you a wonderfull 2 thumbs up for sheer imagination alone. *claps playfully*
Do you have MSN, or ICQ, perhaps AOL?

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**rose** · August 24th, 2001, 05:28 PM

msn and yahoo chat...

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**Hannibal** · August 24th, 2001, 05:34 PM

Do I have to spell it out? What's your hotmail account? So that I may add you to my MSN list. You see, being an online geek like myself, I try to have all the messangers. However, I never use my Yahoo smile