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  1. September 10th, 2001, 11:48 PM #1
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    I thought you were my pillow last night.
    I conversed
    &
    cuddled.
    I kissed
    &
    snuggled.
    In my head,
    you talked back
    &
    gained against my skin.
    I woke up to have you gone
    &
    my dreams done. (hung out to dry)

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    i like the line spacing and use of the ampersand....its kinda e e cummings (a little) but i still liked it, its simple yet very poetic,

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  3. September 11th, 2001, 08:33 PM #3
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    an enjoyable read...that's all i got in this tired state of mind

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