hiding

[sarafinamable]

your fingers pierce me,
and i am afraid of needles

but it's ok to cry, you tell me
it's ok to cry and not to feel

so when you catch me hiding
i am really feeling

and it's easy to lie to you
but hard to love you

the only thing you ask for in return

so i can't love you but i can lie to you

and i do

because your fingers pierce me
and i am afraid of needles

but it's ok to cry, you tell me
instead i start to feel though,

that's when you catch me hiding

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this is life, you don't have to be perfect

[machinery]

the message in this work is concrete.
the use of needles to relate to the feeling is prime.

for this work, it's good that the message is clear but still persists to be poetic.

it's not too much descrip.
it's just enough...

good work of hand on this one.

RP

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"ashtray says you were up all night."

[sarafinamable]

thanks machinery.
i actually met you at a party here at ISU, you recommended me to this site. thankyou, i finally found it.

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this is life, you don't have to be perfect