wrecked

[Hannibal]

I really enjoyed this one. I can't explain it, but it read well, and I just enjoyed it.
Good work.

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As miserable as life may be I hold it pretty precious...

If I lose the light of the sun, I will write by candlelight, moonlight, no light. If I lose paper and ink, I wil write in blood on forgotten walls. I will write always, I will capture nights all over the world and bring them to you.
Word And Voice
Motocross Fanatics
General Philosophy

[utopianChaos]

this style sang to me.... it's a first.
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long to feel the passion grow

the fear
the fault
to fuel
the flame

hide the wreck no one must know

her touch
her kiss
is but
the same

slip away for taught are not

the ways
the whys
in love
remain

moments pass through months uncaught

goodbye
farwell
came what
of Cain

ignore the dolour yes tis true

his touch
his kiss
oh pain
so tame

long for passion that once grew

in fear
the fault
is but
the same

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utopianChaos

[rose]

i totally agreed with hannible...it flowed nicely. i like the scheme that u put it in. very nice.

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