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[sarafinamable]

she is beauty in every sense of the word.
a twirling maze of spontaneous colors, catching each sugary reflection on her toungue.
she hoovers above the ground with glowing wings, fluttering gently in the warm, starlite air.
she is ambient and solitaire, viewing through deep blue eyes a lovely sheltered place.
the innocence of evil holding a piece of her heart.
content the hand of a stranger to be love, paradise, adventure.
and a smile to be trust.
When everything here is sad, desperate and wrong; she is beauty in every sense of the word
the beauty of mexico's sunsets
the beauty of a sleeping city
the beauty of a girl who laughs with no restrictions
who dances with no music
and who catches snowflakes on her tongue.
these things i will never forget.

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"this is life not heaven, you don't have to be perfect."
Gia
"Our love was comfortable and so broken in"
John Mayer
http://www.onemoredrink.moonfruit.com
First Name Basis is a great, little known band (so far), check out their website

[Generalkaos]

A small point: you could take the cliche "in every sense of the word" and shorten it to "in every sense" and go on to explain how her beauty applies to each of the senses. You seemed to make some nods in that direction.

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Fetch me my blue fright wig, that I may be handsome when I unleash my wrath.

[sarafinamable]

that might work, thankyou for replying

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"this is life not heaven, you don't have to be perfect."
Gia
"Our love was comfortable and so broken in"
John Mayer
http://www.onemoredrink.moonfruit.com
First Name Basis is a great, little known band (so far), check out their website