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    Nestled in the harbor,
    high upon the hills
    the lighthouse stands far away
    jaded from the years
    faithfully giving of her light
    that brings no ships to shore
    her light only calls out for help
    in search of something more.
    The lighthouse stands in solitude
    projecting beams so bright
    masses of ships seek a light
    and she hopes they try to find;
    what they need to become so safe
    away from dangers grasp
    but all she wants is to touch
    a ship of mighty mass.
    All who find her are the ones
    to scared to dock at bay
    ships would rather fight the waves
    then sail a different way.
    As time does pass, her light goes dim
    with every ship her light does kiss.
    she hungers too, and begins to miss...

    A ship that sailed one day
    that found her in a storm
    holding on to her so tight
    her light helped guide him home
    while he stayed, her light burned brighter,
    she felt her purpose more
    feeling her place is where she belonged
    then what she thought before!

    When the tides come in
    they have to go out
    and shallow water remains.
    A ship that docks need to survive
    and has to find new bays.
    That ship set sail upon the waves
    as her light shown the way
    that night it burned a shade of blue
    to guide him far away.
    and send him out into a place
    that she can never touch
    cause her light cant reach that far
    her light goes dim from lust.
    Storms have come with rain and fog
    blocking her light once more
    trying to go back to the day
    saving the ship from the storm.
    She longs for warmth
    but gains no more.
    Realizing the place for thee
    is nor the ship or even at sea.
    There the lighthouse stands alone
    with a steady beam at night
    protecting ships from her shore
    wondering how bright to burn her light.
    What ships dont see is the echoing inside
    that long to feel something
    she searches to go back to that night
    just so she doesnt have to feel nothing.
    She knows very well that ship is gone
    So now her light must be
    buring brightly to guide the one
    that is ment for thee.




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    it seems a little wordy. in a way...small in the thought of the subject. u did well in describing it but it seems youthful. i suggest u keep posting and keep working on different things and ideas. u are doing well at giving the visual, and at sympathizing with the thoughts of the lighthouse. i can see that lighthouse as being an old woman who has seen her days and done her share.just wordy....keep posting.

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