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January 19th, 2002, 06:44 AM
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i think this was a beautiful poem. I agree with what was said about the imagery, and your your purpose behind this writing style is so fitting. It flows smoothly as the content of the poem. If it were a row boat, the structure and content are the paddles, eachstroke at different times, aiding in the boat's journey.
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