Broken

[Lunatic Fringe]

<font color=blue>I'm not special
there's no difference
between me and the next guy
except for some space
where my heart used to be
we're all the same
don't be fooled
I'm even worse
I'm the clone that's defective
industrial discard
box me with your broken things
and the rest of what you don't want anymore
I'm not special
there's no difference
throw me
Away</font>

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"With a gun barrel between your teeth you speak only in vowels." - Jack, Fight Club

[sarafinamable]

wow, this clearly gets your emotion across; and i'm pretty sure that a lot of people can relate. i really like this, its probably one that i will keep coming back to.

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"this is life not heaven, you don't have to be perfect."
Gia
"Our love was comfortable and so broken in"
John Mayer
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[SHATOUSHKA]

i'll be honest...

this poem rocked.

however, right about at the 'no difference'
part...i was kinda anticipating a tangent.

in this case, its a good thing...
i wanted more.

but you know what?
perhaps thats the beauty of it--
i'm female...
you let me down.

(you rat bastard! *throws hair back*)


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~~share some greased tea with me~~
General Philosophy
Discuss This...
The Acropolis

[Lunatic Fringe]

Which "no difference", exactly?
and what were you hoping for?

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"Try setting it to 'Wumpum'"

[SHATOUSHKA]

3rd line from the bottom.

i was hoping i'd orgasm first.
that didn't happen...again.

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~~share some greased tea with me~~
General Philosophy
Discuss This...
The Acropolis

[thrutheeyesofme]

what i like about the way you write on this topic is how you externalise it... like 'box me up', its so impersonal and detatched.... i would perhaps even read this one and your other one i loved (this is so rude but i cant remember the title) as a series or something... do you think they would work together?