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March 25th, 2002, 03:48 AM
#1
Inactive Member
I see him all the time
all over town:
crossing the highway going up West 2nd,
the sidewalks of Main,
even on Highway 264 in traffic.
a big guy,
slow of mind,
pedaling a big tricycle
with a wire basket,
orange flag waving in the wind
and a license plate
that says
JESUS.
he rides around
in the rain, cold and shine,
sometimes stopping to talk
to a group of young girls
about something.
he wears a
red cap, too.
I don't know his story
but I suppose I've told
you
all that needs to be
known.
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"what's jail?"
"everything's jail."
"Texas? What's a 'Texas'?"
--Spongebob Squarepants
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March 26th, 2002, 05:21 AM
#2
Senior Hostboard Member
I don't think that you've posted a piece I've ever really not cared for. Perhaps you should post more, even the bad stuff 
I know you've got some of it!! we all do...
or at least, I do.. hahaha
Once more, I like the work, and the way the closing sums up so much, but is almost an oxymoron of sorts, I really dig it.
Good work
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If I lose the light of the sun, I will write by candlelight, moonlight, no light. If I lose paper and ink, I wil write in blood on forgotten walls. I will write always, I will capture nights all over the world and bring them to you.
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